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anonymous
 one year ago
HELP!!! MEDAL AWARDED TO ANYONE THAT HELPS!
Use temporal transitions to revise the following paragraph. You may need to create additional details or information. Use proper spelling and grammar.
Darius went to the store. He wanted food. He ran into his teacher there. They talked about his latest project. He decided to base his project on gourmet cooking.
anonymous
 one year ago
HELP!!! MEDAL AWARDED TO ANYONE THAT HELPS! Use temporal transitions to revise the following paragraph. You may need to create additional details or information. Use proper spelling and grammar. Darius went to the store. He wanted food. He ran into his teacher there. They talked about his latest project. He decided to base his project on gourmet cooking.

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anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0@usukidoll can you please help me ill follow you as well

UsukiDoll
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1Normally I don't help with questions in English...probably because I need to focus on Mathematics. Hmmmmmmm.... we have to use all past tense though, so your setting better be in the past.

UsukiDoll
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1so what would be a good setting? like a time?

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0okay thanks & um...like an era or like time as in 2:00..?

UsukiDoll
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1well... we still need to respect history as back then people bartered and there weren't any stores. And since the story has to be in past tense, we can't use this week or next week.

UsukiDoll
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1barter < to trade goods with one another

UsukiDoll
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1the last sentence mentioned "gourmet cooking" so we can't have him go to the dollar store.

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Lol so it could be Darius had gone to tho the store lats week.

UsukiDoll
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1yes exactly like last week or yesterday

UsukiDoll
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1being specific about the time and day works too... as long as it's not the future xD

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Okay thanks thats a big help

UsukiDoll
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1what about method of transportation? And how old is Darius anyway? Darius could be an adult... maybe he drives or catch the bus? His class could be for community college Or.. Darius could be a teenager in high school and either he caught the bus or his parents drove him.

UsukiDoll
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1There is a food science and nutrition class in high school... maybe that's a good subject for where the assignment came from

UsukiDoll
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1Or he could be in a culinary program at a community college... see how listing all the possibilities we can have different scenarios

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0yeah thanks i have to write another one as well so ill try that

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Temporal transition as in using different grammar devices without changing the original meaning of the paragraph?

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Gotcha thanks @Robert136

UsukiDoll
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1someone out there got the temporal transition meaning http://openstudy.com/study#/updates/526f23b4e4b017700a8d231e

UsukiDoll
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1ok.. maybe the research topic is a big part of his grade and he's not doing so well right now?! or it could be for extra credit endless possibilities.

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Darias had transported his presence to the store.

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0He had the desire to consume food

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0He had unexpectedly encountered his teacher there.

UsukiDoll
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1I'm using techniques from one of my literary analysis classes from a long time ago. This short 6 word only For Sale Baby Shoes Never Worn

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0They had a conversation/discourse about their most recent project.

UsukiDoll
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1is an example ... of having endless possibilities.

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0He decided upon completing his project via activity called gourmet cooking.

UsukiDoll
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1transported? how though? ah lets say by bus xD! keep in mind with the past tense... technology didn't have teleporters xD!

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0There you have it all

UsukiDoll
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1so Darius eats a lot and just from some out of the blue moment bumps into his teacher?! O_O! XDDDDDDD!

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Since the means of transportation is not explicitly known, you need to transition the sentence without expressing the means by which he had arrived at the store.

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Yess i do! i appreciate it thanks guys @UsukiDoll @Robert136

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Therefore, disregard the means, and hence say "arrived to the store" "arrived at the store" "he had moved from point A to point B" kind of way

UsukiDoll
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1what about this? "You may need to create additional details or information. Use proper spelling and grammar. "

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0yeah i see what you mean thanks.

UsukiDoll
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1we can create additional details or information. Nothing is stopping us

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0You can't diverge from what is already stated in the original paragraph, nor make up anything not already said or known.

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0diverge as in go off from what's already said

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0as in detracting from what is conveyed by the paragraph

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0hence nullifying the paragraph in question

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0General English doesn't really intersect with Science English

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0For example, "get the momentum" doesn't mean so when using the phrase

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0English speakers are ignorant enough to use the phrase without knowing the physics behind it:):)

UsukiDoll
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1but anyway if you can't diverge away from the information, what's the point in this then? "You may need to create additional details or information. Use proper spelling and grammar. " It was listed after the instructions.

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0I think that temporal transition is valid only when one uses transition verbs/words to make the paragraph flow better. That doesn't allow you to make up things that would blemish the original points being conveyed.

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0We know that he went to the store, he met his teacher, and that he wanted food, as well as that he had decided to base his project on gourmet cooking

UsukiDoll
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1Oh I see like Darius went to the store because he wanted food.

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0but saying the facts without "connection" doesn't sound rhetorical either.

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Since he wanted food, he had gone to the store. Surprisingly he met his teacher out of the blue. After talking to the teacher about his upcoming assignment he had decided to base it on gourmet cooking.

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0See that flows better

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0That still conserves the original points

UsukiDoll
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1Since Darius wanted food, he had gone to the store. Surprisingly, he met his teacher out of the blue. After talking to the teach about his upcoming assignment, he had decided to base it on gourmet cooking Missing a few commas.

UsukiDoll
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1I see so we have to focus on what we already have and use connections to make the sentences flow better.

UsukiDoll
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1At least my editing never died xD. Yeah I used to be a big fan of English courses. Not sure what happened...maybe after I declared Math as my major everything in English fell apart...funny though because I still score A's in upper division English. xD.

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Yeah everyone is refined every year

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0I am going into university from this September majoring in Physics. In order to do so, I would still require extensive training in numeracy skills as well as algebraic, even so far as calculus.

UsukiDoll
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1oops Since Darius wanted food, he had gone to the store. Surprisingly, he met his teacher out of the blue. After talking to the teach[er] about his upcoming assignment, he had decided to base it on gourmet cooking

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Missing any commas? I really suck at commas:)

UsukiDoll
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1hehe I already took Calculus 14 . The last one is nasty .. and for Calculus II YOU WILL BE MEMORIZING A LOT OF FORMULAS! >:D

UsukiDoll
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1I made a typo I typed teach instead of teach[er]

UsukiDoll
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1Mathematical Physics is killer. You will be computing a lot and it's lengthy.

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0I can see that already happening..... thanks to our brains

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0they say thousands of numbers are unconsciously involved in executing any move

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0I mean in our biological brain

UsukiDoll
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1my homework was long... sure I had 2 weeks but wow still I could barely get to every problem. On top of that I was using LaTeX which types out Math formulas.

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0I guess we are all paying the price of using calculators

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0In china calculators are banned

UsukiDoll
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1P.S. I haven't been using Calculators for years and I got used to it already

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0where are you based?

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Hey let's go to the questio by juliadiogenes
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