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  1. Destinyyyy
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    @FoxxJamey

  2. anonymous
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    i cant get those word docs to open on my laptop

  3. Destinyyyy
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    Oh.. Okay ill try to post them

  4. anonymous
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    okay, so what now?

  5. anonymous
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    Yeah take out the Alaska part. I'd put something along the lines of "they both have exciting things to do and good times to be had." Something like that maybe

  6. anonymous
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    the pools, different resorts have activities that are unique to each one, meeting new people, friendly atmosphere

  7. anonymous
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    Are you trying to see if i think that's good?

  8. Destinyyyy
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    Yes.. Sorry Im doing this and another assignment on the social science group

  9. anonymous
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    Yeah i think that links it better than what you had before, way better. and its all good :)

  10. Destinyyyy
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    Okay.. Next part

  11. anonymous
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    yeah imo i'd take out the bug part

  12. anonymous
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    Yep thats good

  13. Destinyyyy
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    I might need to add words later on

  14. Destinyyyy
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    |dw:1435867259836:dw|

  15. Destinyyyy
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    For some weird reason it changes it

  16. anonymous
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    Put a period after pesky bugs. A comma needs to go after "at a campsite", take out the comma between vampire bugs and mosquitos

  17. anonymous
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    and where that comma was put "and"

  18. anonymous
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    looks good, except up where it says "keep away bugs such as, " there doesnt need to be a comma

  19. Destinyyyy
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    Okay

  20. Destinyyyy
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    I have 528 words.. I need a min of 700. And a conclusion

  21. anonymous
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    well your conclusion should take care of most of the rest of the 700,, id write the conclusion first and then see how much you need to add

  22. Destinyyyy
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    Okay.. And this "Finally, your ideas would flow better if you completed your sentence fragments. For example, you have some fragments from third body paragraph: Or for the kids the arcade or play areas. Or being trapped and scared in a camper or rv. Sentence fragments like these are incomplete ideas that have no clear subject, predicate, or both. To clarify their ideas, you need to supply a subject, predicate, or a whole independent clause. "

  23. anonymous
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    Ugh professors i tell ya xD. You just need to find a way to make those complete sentences

  24. Destinyyyy
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    Seriously lol .... Or for the kids the arcade or play areas to hang out at. ? Or being trapped and scared in a camper or rv during a storm. ?

  25. anonymous
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    That looks better

  26. Destinyyyy
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    Okay... Now to start the conclusion ... :(

  27. Destinyyyy
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    611 words

  28. anonymous
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    Don't worry you're doing great :). Conclusions are the easiest thing to write

  29. Destinyyyy
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    Oh thanks :) Sureeeee they are

  30. anonymous
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    in my opinion they are :), you're welcome :)

  31. Destinyyyy
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    Ughhh

  32. anonymous
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    whats wrong?

  33. Destinyyyy
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    Writers block..

  34. anonymous
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    i hate writer's block. Have you taken a break recently?

  35. Destinyyyy
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    Whats that? .... My only breaks are going to sleep at night or lunch.. I didnt take a lunch break today.

  36. anonymous
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    oh wow. Your brain might be on overload then, i'd take a short break and eat a snack or something

  37. Destinyyyy
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    Alright.. Im gonna go eat something and head to the grocery store.. Ill be back on in an hour or so.. Then maybe Ill have ideas for the conclusion

  38. anonymous
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    okey dokey, ttyl

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