Destinyyyy
  • Destinyyyy
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Destinyyyy
  • Destinyyyy
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anonymous
  • anonymous
i cant get those word docs to open on my laptop
Destinyyyy
  • Destinyyyy
Oh.. Okay ill try to post them

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anonymous
  • anonymous
okay, so what now?
anonymous
  • anonymous
Yeah take out the Alaska part. I'd put something along the lines of "they both have exciting things to do and good times to be had." Something like that maybe
anonymous
  • anonymous
the pools, different resorts have activities that are unique to each one, meeting new people, friendly atmosphere
anonymous
  • anonymous
Are you trying to see if i think that's good?
Destinyyyy
  • Destinyyyy
Yes.. Sorry Im doing this and another assignment on the social science group
anonymous
  • anonymous
Yeah i think that links it better than what you had before, way better. and its all good :)
Destinyyyy
  • Destinyyyy
Okay.. Next part
anonymous
  • anonymous
yeah imo i'd take out the bug part
anonymous
  • anonymous
Yep thats good
Destinyyyy
  • Destinyyyy
I might need to add words later on
Destinyyyy
  • Destinyyyy
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Destinyyyy
  • Destinyyyy
For some weird reason it changes it
anonymous
  • anonymous
Put a period after pesky bugs. A comma needs to go after "at a campsite", take out the comma between vampire bugs and mosquitos
anonymous
  • anonymous
and where that comma was put "and"
anonymous
  • anonymous
looks good, except up where it says "keep away bugs such as, " there doesnt need to be a comma
Destinyyyy
  • Destinyyyy
Okay
Destinyyyy
  • Destinyyyy
I have 528 words.. I need a min of 700. And a conclusion
anonymous
  • anonymous
well your conclusion should take care of most of the rest of the 700,, id write the conclusion first and then see how much you need to add
Destinyyyy
  • Destinyyyy
Okay.. And this "Finally, your ideas would flow better if you completed your sentence fragments. For example, you have some fragments from third body paragraph: Or for the kids the arcade or play areas. Or being trapped and scared in a camper or rv. Sentence fragments like these are incomplete ideas that have no clear subject, predicate, or both. To clarify their ideas, you need to supply a subject, predicate, or a whole independent clause. "
anonymous
  • anonymous
Ugh professors i tell ya xD. You just need to find a way to make those complete sentences
Destinyyyy
  • Destinyyyy
Seriously lol .... Or for the kids the arcade or play areas to hang out at. ? Or being trapped and scared in a camper or rv during a storm. ?
anonymous
  • anonymous
That looks better
Destinyyyy
  • Destinyyyy
Okay... Now to start the conclusion ... :(
Destinyyyy
  • Destinyyyy
611 words
anonymous
  • anonymous
Don't worry you're doing great :). Conclusions are the easiest thing to write
Destinyyyy
  • Destinyyyy
Oh thanks :) Sureeeee they are
anonymous
  • anonymous
in my opinion they are :), you're welcome :)
Destinyyyy
  • Destinyyyy
Ughhh
anonymous
  • anonymous
whats wrong?
Destinyyyy
  • Destinyyyy
Writers block..
anonymous
  • anonymous
i hate writer's block. Have you taken a break recently?
Destinyyyy
  • Destinyyyy
Whats that? .... My only breaks are going to sleep at night or lunch.. I didnt take a lunch break today.
anonymous
  • anonymous
oh wow. Your brain might be on overload then, i'd take a short break and eat a snack or something
Destinyyyy
  • Destinyyyy
Alright.. Im gonna go eat something and head to the grocery store.. Ill be back on in an hour or so.. Then maybe Ill have ideas for the conclusion
anonymous
  • anonymous
okey dokey, ttyl

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