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Read the paragraph. Venice was an interesting destination. You have to travel by boat. We toured a chandelier factory. The colored glass was incredible. We enjoyed the artwork in the museums. The museums were crowded with tourists. What is one important way to improve this paragraph? The paragraph should be shorter. Place the last sentence first. Add sentence variety. Add a topic sentence.

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