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anonymous

  • one year ago

Hey guys, just wondering if you could go over my paper for me and offer any suggestion about how I could make it better. I need to have this done ASAP (then i get my phone back :D :D), so it would be helpful if you would go over it for me. THANKS!

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  1. anonymous
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  2. anonymous
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    @AG23 @They_Call_Me_Narii @TheGaMer007 @DarkMoonZ @Owlcoffee

  3. anonymous
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    @misssunshinexxoxo @Aliypop @Teddyiswatshecallsme @jane11509 @Jadeishere @NathalyN @jamesr @uybuyvf @CaptainLlama49 @waterineyes @Vickiesweet @demonchild99

  4. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    THANK YOU!!! <3

  5. anonymous
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    @pooja195 @rvc @Jack_Prism

  6. AG23
    • one year ago
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    its perfect in my opinion

  7. anonymous
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    Okay, thanks AG :) @AG23

  8. AG23
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    np

  9. anonymous
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    same here all good.

  10. anonymous
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    @lurker @Awolflover1

  11. anonymous
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    Thanks Jam :P @jamesr

  12. anonymous
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    ye welcome

  13. anonymous
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    @mm3591

  14. rvc
    • one year ago
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    Well done

  15. anonymous
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    thanks darling. <3 @rvc

  16. mm3591
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    looks good to me

  17. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    Your first line says, Martin is as influential as Muhammad, you can add was with Muhammad.. Martin is as influential as Muhammad was.. And second line, you are using "is" with Muhammad, should not you use "was" there?

  18. anonymous
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    RIGHT. okay, thanks water! You're a life saver @waterineyes

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    @DullJackel09 @animalfan1

  20. anonymous
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    I have just checked only two lines, there are 200 more. :P

  21. anonymous
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    \(I~am~here\) ;^)

  22. anonymous
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    but still. @waterineyes

  23. anonymous
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    And to all, please check her paper for Grammar more.. Point out if any grammatical mistake is there...

  24. anonymous
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    Oh, and to everyone, I'm supposed to use present tense with the verb usage in the paper. XD So that's why I used it that way, I am aware that King is dead and long gone.

  25. anonymous
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    @MrProphecyXII

  26. anonymous
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    Excellent.

  27. anonymous
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    Thanks, proph. :) @MrProphecyXII

  28. anonymous
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    No problemo

  29. anonymous
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    i do really think it was good how you added in the example of law with Hitler, it really helped you bring your point home! overall id say its fantastic!

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