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a poem please let me know what you think

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  1. anonymous
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    I tried to believe that you were different, But the truth just let me down. Realities patterns Were beneath a see through surface. The world will keep spinning But its made out of mostly water So wherever I stand I’m still going to sink. I keep grasping for land But the world just shuts me up. Stuck in the ocean Where buried treasure is left unfound. And I clinched onto you for a while. To keep my head above the water. But we ended like the titanic. Never letting go… But in the end one of still drowns.

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    Lovely poem! By the tone of it, I hope you (or the speaker) feel better. Would love to read more of your work. :)

  3. anonymous
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    I already read your other pieces, please don't stop writing! This is very lovely! :) I always want to write, but I don't have lots of potential like you do. Again, amazing work! :3

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    @ccieux thank you so much

  5. anonymous
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    @isabellewaab im so glad you like my works it means so much. Also it just takes practice I go back to some of my older poetry and I cringe sometimes lol

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