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Need help!! Need your advice on a paragraph

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  1. MTALHAHASSAN2
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  2. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    Is that the Katrina’s is plagiarism or not??

  3. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    I will say this is plagiarism because she is using the Hugh Holman’s thought as her thought

  4. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    are you all agree

  5. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    Can some one help me plz

  6. Loser66
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    I don't think so!! in the original sentence, most of the information are the names and the time. There is no way to paraphrase the such paragraph without using those names and times. Moreover, that is a DEFINITION, not a thought!!, so we can not say it is plagiarism.

  7. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    so you think its not a plagiarism

  8. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    Is that the Katrina’s is plagiarism or not??

  10. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    @teagirl7630

  11. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    what you think is that paragraph is plagiarism or not

  12. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    why not

  13. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    @megashine are you able to help me with it

  14. anonymous
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    I think this some of it is plagiarism . But also some of it isn't.

  15. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    so what can i say thou

  16. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    it make me more confuse

  17. anonymous
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    Basically, in your own words, write about how the teacher is right but also is wrong. Say that she as points and faults. Point out that you can clearly tell that the student's essay is based off the other person's writing, and even if it isn't copied and pasted, everything should be cited. So, take your own spin on the question; you agree with both, but you also believe that no matter what is being quoted, should be cited. At least, that's what I would do. And I excel in English.

  18. anonymous
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    has points**

  19. anonymous
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    Does that make sense?

  20. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    yes but wait a sec

  21. anonymous
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    Yes?

  22. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    so basically i wrote this: I believe this passage is plagiarism because I think you are using some other person thought as your own thoughts without including the name of that people. You are also just changing the structure of the sentences and some words but which is still a plagiarism. The better way to use any person thought is to include his/ or her name in your paragraph like as for this passage you can say According to the Hugh Holman’s,” ………. Etc. There is also a lot of way for including a person name in your passage but you much have to include that. So this be the first step for the second step you also have to record the entire source where you getting this information from. The third way be if you are using any person quotation it maybe be the direct quotation then please don’t forget to include the

  23. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    can you plz look at it

  24. anonymous
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    I read it .

  25. anonymous
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    That's the idea. I can't edit it for you, but you have the idea down!

  26. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    so am i doing it right

  27. anonymous
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    Yes!

  28. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    ok thnx but do you wanna give me any advice

  29. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    so that i can make it better

  30. anonymous
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    If you're siding with the teacher, then make sure to blanky type out, "I believe the teacher is right because. . ." And then list your reasons why, and back up those reasons. If you do that, than you are good to go!

  31. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    ok thnx

  32. anonymous
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    Anytime!

  33. MTALHAHASSAN2
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  34. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    Is that the Katrina’s is plagiarism or not??

  35. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    I will say this is plagiarism because she is using the Hugh Holman’s thought as her thought

  36. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    what you think @sunflower21

  37. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    @k_r_y_s_s_o_u_l_a

  38. MTALHAHASSAN2
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  39. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    Is that the Katrina’s is plagiarism or not??

  40. anonymous
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    reading c:

  41. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    I will say this is plagiarism because she is using the Hugh Holman’s thought as her thought

  42. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    ok take ur time

  43. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    @k_r_y_s_s_o_u_l_a

  44. anonymous
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    You are correct. Kind of. It is plagiarism. because shes claiming something that isnt hers, but then again.... it was a thought not a statement.

  45. anonymous
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    But I mean. shes copying him. so it is plagiarism.

  46. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    i know that not the thought

  47. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    but then what can i say

  48. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    i just wrote this: I believe the teacher is right because Katrina is using some other person thought as her own thoughts without including the name of that people. Like, she is only just changing the structure of the sentences and some words but which is still know as plagiarism. The better way to use any person thought is to include his/or her name in your paragraph like as for this passage you can say According to the Hugh Holman’s,” ………. etc. There is also a lot of way for including a person name in your passage but you much have to include that. So this be the first step which may she have to correct for avoiding from the plagiarism. The second step be that you also have to record the entire source where you getting this information from but I don't think so she include that she just copy the original dates from the original paragraph that what she do. The last step be if you are using any person quotation it maybe be the direct quotation or any other but please don’t forget to include the author, title, publisher, place of publication and date of publication etc.

  49. anonymous
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    Ok. it looks good but change some words. don't but the word "like, she is..." put for example.

  50. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    but i need some more detail thou

  51. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    plz help me with that

  52. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    plz

  53. anonymous
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    ? I dont understand why do you need more detail

  54. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    because my teacher want in 250 word

  55. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    right know its 193

  56. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    plz help me friend

  57. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    i will give a medal + fan

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