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  1. sicklefirebolt
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    I've done some editing on it and I think it seem pretty good, but I'd like a second pair of eyes to check it out!

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    Many people know about the Holocaust, but what some people fail to realize is that the Holocaust was not the only genocide that is significantly important. Genocides, such as the one that happened to the Native Americans, have been occurring since the world had people on it and have shaped our world just like the Holocaust did. Orson Scott Card's novel Ender's Game illustrates the horrifying but all too real concept of these types of massacres and how they affect people in the real world. Ender's Game by Orson Scott Card is an intense novel that deals with a lot of human rights issues. Issues like war and how it affects people happen every day, and are very prominent in the book. Even though those issues are shown, the issue of genocide is the biggest human rights issue that the book concentrates on as an end result of war. "Within three seconds the entire planet burst apart." Card describes, "becoming a sphere of bright dust, hurling outward"(Card, 303). The destruction of the world, and the buggers, is detailed in this quote. Everything about the world was gone, turned to dust in mere seconds. The planet was not the only thing that was abolished, though. "Where the queen was, all the queens from all their colonies, they all were there and you destroyed them completely." (Card, 303).Mazer cheerfully explains to Ender, who understandably self-destructs after this. Everything that once was about the Buggers was decamped, including their race. When many American's think of genocide, they do not want to imagine how the biggest one happened on American soil by the Spanish troops that came to colonize it. "They set forth across the countryside, tearing into assembled masses of sick and unarmed native people, slaughtering them by the thousands." (Stannard, 70). The troops carelessly and apathetically went around murdering natives, not caring as they were hurting a whole population. They stole, killed, raped, and tortured the natives. This wasn't a result of war, either, unlike in Ender's Game. According to the book, more than 50,000 natives were reported dead from the encounters. During their 'visit' to the newly found United States, the Admiral had came down with a sickness, which allowed the troops to do whatever they wanted. This genocide was extremely violent and unscrupulous, unlike what Ender did to the Buggers. Ender's Game by Orson Scott Card deals with some pretty serious topics. Among them is the topic of genocide. At the end of the book, Ender fought in a war against the Buggers, killing out their entire species. Massacres like these can sometimes be a result of war, such as in Hiroshima, Japan. According to the Associated Press, the bomb that was dropped on Hiroshima killed at least 140,000 people. The one that was dropped on Nagaski murdered around 80,000 people. The bombing of Hiroshima and Nagasaki was not only a low blow, but it was devastating for the people who lived in those towns. In World War II, the U.S. destroyed a big chunk of the Japanese population. Although it wasn't full pledge, it could still be considered a small attempted carnage. "Death and devastation were instantaneous. Trees, wooden houses, people were suddenly ash, leaving a scorched, empty plain for 2 kilometers (1.2 miles) in all directions". (The Associated Press). Just like in Ender bombing the Bugger's planet, the U.S. deployed a bomb onto Japan that destroyed things close to it, going on for miles. In the novel, the Bugger's ship were instantly turned to ash, leaving nothing left of the alien ships. The devastation in Hiroshima was horrifying, turning anything within the mile radius to complete dust. Nothing was left in that area when the bomb went off. It's easy to pull from the text that genocide is an extremely real and devastating thing that isn't just the topic or result of a conflict that happens in books. It can be a result of war, or a result of people deciding to run rampage around land. According to the Declaration of Human rights, all human beings are born free and equal in dignity and rights (Article 1). Humans are born with certain rights, such as the right to be free and live their life, and the act of genocide goes against basic human rights. Ender's Game is a good illustration of how war can damage someone, as well has how calamitous genocide can be to a population.

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