MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
Need help in creating my own poem!! Write a short poem of approximately 10 lines describing an important event (either personal or historical) or an emotional state of mind using rich, connotative language. Then write a reflective journal of approximately 200 words in which you discuss the word choices you made and what effect you wanted to achieve.
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  • chestercat
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Whitemonsterbunny17
  • Whitemonsterbunny17
Ahhhhhhhh, this shall be fun. ^.^
Whitemonsterbunny17
  • Whitemonsterbunny17
What subject type suits you? I can give you ideas.
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
I don't have any idea I need ur idea

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MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
which topic would be easier to write it on
Whitemonsterbunny17
  • Whitemonsterbunny17
Okay, well I typically write poems of optimism.. Stuff like "After every storm comes a rainbow, And we all know that at the end of a rainbow lies a pot of gold."
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
do you have any poem which u would like to share
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
Because I don't have any idea about its structure
Whitemonsterbunny17
  • Whitemonsterbunny17
Here's one: At the edge of it all, Many a tear may fall. These dark clouds overwhelm our once clear skies, Have no fear, though- don't be discouraged- for soon after this dark storm, a bright, happy sun will arise. Preceding each storm, a miraculous rainbow enlightens our once dark sky, And onward through a new path of happiness we can now fly. We all know that at the bottom of each rainbow lies an immense treasure, And within this treasure may we find our pleasure.
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
nice one
Whitemonsterbunny17
  • Whitemonsterbunny17
Thanks ^.^ I mean, I can make poems out of pretty much anything. xD
Whitemonsterbunny17
  • Whitemonsterbunny17
Let's see.. What's your favorite hobbie? Or even your favorite thing to talk about?
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
but don't be have to choose any event
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
what they mean by the historical
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
I think tree and rainbows are not an event thou
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
brb
Whitemonsterbunny17
  • Whitemonsterbunny17
Write a short poem of approximately 10 lines describing an important event (either personal or historical) or an emotional state of mind using rich, connotative language. What this is asking is for you to choose an important event that either happened in your own life (such as how it felt to win your first game) or in history (such as how the soldiers feel when at war). Or, alternately, you could write about an emotional state of mind (such as sadness or happiness. What it means by using connotative words is to use words that have a special meaning to you, rather than just simply the dictionary definition of the word.
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
oh ok
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
know that makes a sence
Whitemonsterbunny17
  • Whitemonsterbunny17
So, for instance, if you were to write about sadness, it could go like this: A clear blue sky of which birds fly, A warm, bright sun that brings much fun. Overshadowed by a dark grey cloud as birds come falling from the sky. Here I stand and I watch, as my tears run. Why, why must we all die? We never know when our time is done. What is this sadness that makes me cry? Why has the dark cloud won? This imminent death, this dark cloud, it's all so sly. It's impossible to outrun. I stay here, wasting away as the birds die at the bay. Until my days left reach none.
Whitemonsterbunny17
  • Whitemonsterbunny17
(freestyling)
Whitemonsterbunny17
  • Whitemonsterbunny17
Ah, the second to last line doesn't work.
Whitemonsterbunny17
  • Whitemonsterbunny17
Fix: ***as the birds cease to fly***
Whitemonsterbunny17
  • Whitemonsterbunny17
Or **** as the birds continue to die**** That's better.
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
ok but do you creat this by ourself
Whitemonsterbunny17
  • Whitemonsterbunny17
Yeah, I just freestyled it xD
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
wait what you mean by freestyled
Whitemonsterbunny17
  • Whitemonsterbunny17
I mean that I just made it up just now xD
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
ok lol
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
Actually, I am really so bad in the poem stuff
Whitemonsterbunny17
  • Whitemonsterbunny17
What's inspiring to you?
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
nothing I guess
Whitemonsterbunny17
  • Whitemonsterbunny17
:o
Whitemonsterbunny17
  • Whitemonsterbunny17
What motivates you to get out of bed in the morning?
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
I will say the school
Whitemonsterbunny17
  • Whitemonsterbunny17
You like school?
Whitemonsterbunny17
  • Whitemonsterbunny17
Or wait, holdup. Cricket. Tell me about cricket.
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
not really I like sports specially cricket
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
yes madam what you wanna know about cricket
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
its a bowl and bat game
Whitemonsterbunny17
  • Whitemonsterbunny17
Tell me about your best game
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
One team have to bowl and other have to bat
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
I don't play games because I am not a kid know but you are so
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
enjoy your video games
Whitemonsterbunny17
  • Whitemonsterbunny17
I don't mean video games.. I mean your best game of cricket.. yanno, like the most exciting time you played
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
last time the cricket which I played in Icc Cricket World cup 2011 game
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
is*
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
but some time I usually playy cricket games on my mobile for fun
Whitemonsterbunny17
  • Whitemonsterbunny17
Tell me about how that went.. How it felt
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
Its went really good and I win my all the group matches after that my team qualify for the quater final which was against west indians
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
From there my team easily won by 10 wickets and then the qualify for the semi final
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
but unfortunately my team lose that match because of some poor batting
Whitemonsterbunny17
  • Whitemonsterbunny17
That's still pretty awesome! You could write a poem about that!
anonymous
  • anonymous
@Whitemonsterbunny17 Your poems are incredibly swimmingly awesome
Whitemonsterbunny17
  • Whitemonsterbunny17
Awe, thank you! @Robert136
anonymous
  • anonymous
I miss my high school English class lol those poetic devises ring my bell
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
know how it felt: As you know my team lose in the semi final from that I got disappointed by my team and then I never play that game before!!
Whitemonsterbunny17
  • Whitemonsterbunny17
Yeah, I never really had to do much poetry in high school, but it was always a treat. You can still make poems, though!
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
@Whitemonsterbunny17 how was it
anonymous
  • anonymous
Intermingling of the analytical mind and language is untoppable.
Whitemonsterbunny17
  • Whitemonsterbunny17
Well, even though your team lost, you can still write a poem about it, you can use all the emotion you felt throughout it.
Whitemonsterbunny17
  • Whitemonsterbunny17
Very true, Robert.
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
@Whitemonsterbunny17 how??
Whitemonsterbunny17
  • Whitemonsterbunny17
Easily. There are so many options.. You could write about the matches your team won, how it felt to play against the other team.. if it was intimidating or exciting, you can write about the feel of the adrenaline Or you could write about how it felt when your team lost..
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
but how am I goona discribe it
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
any example plz
Whitemonsterbunny17
  • Whitemonsterbunny17
Hrmmm... Just a shot here... I was next to bat, so I walked forward anxiously, Fearfully yet fearlessly, And I confidently swung the bat, and bamn! ............... Continue
Whitemonsterbunny17
  • Whitemonsterbunny17
You could write about the pressure you felt Or about how it felt to see the other team standing in front of you Intimidation or confidence Fearfulness or fearlessness Write about the memorable moments
Whitemonsterbunny17
  • Whitemonsterbunny17
Memorable feelings
Whitemonsterbunny17
  • Whitemonsterbunny17
See, what you need is to pack it with emotion, and you can easily get a poem.
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
ok I try my best to complete it
Whitemonsterbunny17
  • Whitemonsterbunny17
Did my suggestions help at all?
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
yes a lot
anonymous
  • anonymous
Sometimes poem requires your shining imagination. Try to be outside of your thinking box. For instance instead of using the language by means of literal communication try to draw and let it transcend to your mind with your subconscimous. Let ot flow along with your thoughts
anonymous
  • anonymous
Sometimes let your honesty take over the common sense. Leave the literal conventions behind. Weave your pieces with utmost of your instinct.
Whitemonsterbunny17
  • Whitemonsterbunny17
^ Exactly, that was very well said. I don't think I could have said it any better.
anonymous
  • anonymous
Poem can be used in normal writing ehXD Sometimes poems are melodramatic so they border on imaginative writing and literary jargon. One needs to be cautious

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