Need help with my poem!!

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here is my poem: It was a nice Sunny day for playing cricket The Stadium was packed with the crowd I was next to bat, so I walked forward anxiously, Fearfully yet fearlessly, And I confidently swung the bat, and bamn! But the other side bowling team trying to make me nervous. but I make my self-believe very high, confidence. And handling the pressure well
can someone plz look at my poem!!
Man dude that looks incredibly awesome.

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ok thnx but do you wanna give me any advice where I want any change
Yeah sure leave me to it
So that I can make it more better
The day game for cricket could have been better Even more so with the crowd packed in the Stadium As if to summon the kingdom, the bat on my side I walked forward anxiously yet without fear And with my confidence all time high Swung the bat, against the sea of bowling enemy Shouting and threatening calls of dread Yet, to embrace the moment of execution I, with my duty, stepped in to the challenge
*couldn't have been
How do you like my rephrasing?
Gotta love poetry eh?
Just play around with "the" and change it to however you like
My dream come true in this day of cricket game Amid the applaud of jam packed crowd I, with full determination, stepped in to show The ever lasting dread of my enemy willing to gnaw Embracing my confidence all time high In this day of challenge never up I give With bat on my side, with pitcher on the other The battle of focus between the us two Summoning the incredulous bravery of spirit I, with full eagle, plunge into the deed.
How do you make out of that one?
nice!!
I am glad my friend! Choose which ever you feel like it.
@Robert136 thnx a lot
Anytime
@Robert136 Iam goona choose this one because it makes more sence but the problem is that I need one more sentence for it like they are 9 sentences I need 10!!
For this one The day game for cricket could have been better Even more so with the crowd packed in the Stadium As if to summon the kingdom, the bat on my side I walked forward anxiously yet without fear And with my confidence all time high Swung the bat, against the sea of bowling enemy Shouting and threatening calls of dread Yet, to embrace the moment of execution I, with my duty, stepped in to the challenge
To the eventual success yet to be made.
This is the last one.
Add it to the poem
ok
what be a good topic for it
The judgement day
lol I am so flashy today
The Judgment Day
Just to be clear on capitalization
I bet you will get A+ lol
so the topic be the judgement day right
yup
the last question be that how can I write a reflective journal of approximately 200 words in which you discuss the word choices you made and what effect you wanted to achieve.
Ok. Do you want me to give you a sample?
ok sure
Are you trying to make a poem, @MTALHAHASSAN2?
yes
I already make one
@Robert136 help me a lot
can you plz look at if you don't mind
@MTALHAHASSAN2 Where are you from?
ok
Pakistan
One hour ahead of me, ok
where u from
But I live in Canada
Pakistan as well, but I live in Dubai
Haha
I personally dedicate this poem as a memoir to my cricket game. Throughout the poem I ensured that each word picked carries a connotative significance. For example, the title "Judgement Day" provokes a feeling of tension as I face the adversity which stood in front of me. Moreover "packed with crowd" in the Stadium implies that I am being watched by thousands of people expecting me to perform. Amid the fear of failure I had word the poem in a risky way which may possibly come off as overly melodramatic however to those with similar experience would resonate. As such the conclusion of poem leaves a piece of foreshadowing to be done as the reader would ponder what happened after the conclusion, and such is my ambiguity and ambivalence of my poem, which will peg my memory in the board of life which now I have worked hard to keep.
I like to live in dubai
Guys take that I bet that's super duper melodramatic
:D
@Robert136 where u from
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Canada
really
Which province
Ontario
Why ask?
because I also live in Canada
nice.
we'd make good friends
lol it is the same province man
which city
toronto area
by the way how did you like the reflection?
I live in Mississauga
my brain is on fire today with English
nice.
that's good
glad you found it as such
I struggle with computer science
let me read that
in which university are you
In english the most thing which I hate is the poem
lol poem is like being a drama girl
its take a lot of time to understand
and I love it
idk for me its hard
well, it takes time and practice
learn spanish
makes it easier to understand english
do we have to learn poem in Uni
University
no
you can take a course on pornography
good
XD
but then why they teach poem in high school
waste to time
so that they can masturbate more effectively with better imagination
of
just kidding
@MANaALASKer how is study in dubai
Hey does anyone here know how to use the Java program? I literally suck
sorry I don't
no problem
@Robert136 do you read a novel called brick lane
Nope
no sorry
ok
@Robert136 I need little bit for journey about it so what can I include
more
^^ btw, nice poem
@bubbleslove1234 the question is that I have to write a short poem of approximately 10 lines describing an important event (either personal or historical) or an emotional state of mind using rich, connotative language which I almost finish but I wanna show you my that poem!!
Here is my poem: The Judgment Day The day game for cricket could have been better Even more so with the crowd packed in the Stadium As if to summon the kingdom, the bat on my side I walked forward anxiously yet without fear And with my confidence all time high Swung the bat, against the sea of bowling enemy Shouting and threatening calls of dread Yet, to embrace the moment of execution I, with my duty, stepped in to the challenge To the eventual success yet has to be made.
Is it a good poem?
tbh idk ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
its about a cricket match
@imqwerty idk either .
lol but are you familar with the poems
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what is that
Thats jst - ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ ^
o hello I need help
I'm very sorry, I'm not good with writing
@Michele_Laino the question is that I have to write a short poem of approximately 10 lines describing an important event (either personal or historical) or an emotional state of mind using rich, connotative language which I almost finish but I wanna show you my that poem!!
oh ok
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@bubbleslove1234 check that document
i personlly thought it was amazing bacause of the details you used
well do you think that it needs anything
Idk
i think it is great
but I have to make my paragraph with 200 word
that's only 150
I need 50 more words
but I don't what to write more
well than make the sentences longer.....but you dont want to make it to boring
but then what can I do
gtg be back
ok

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