MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
Need help with my poem!!
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MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
here is my poem: It was a nice Sunny day for playing cricket The Stadium was packed with the crowd I was next to bat, so I walked forward anxiously, Fearfully yet fearlessly, And I confidently swung the bat, and bamn! But the other side bowling team trying to make me nervous. but I make my self-believe very high, confidence. And handling the pressure well
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
can someone plz look at my poem!!
anonymous
  • anonymous
Man dude that looks incredibly awesome.

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MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
ok thnx but do you wanna give me any advice where I want any change
anonymous
  • anonymous
Yeah sure leave me to it
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
So that I can make it more better
anonymous
  • anonymous
The day game for cricket could have been better Even more so with the crowd packed in the Stadium As if to summon the kingdom, the bat on my side I walked forward anxiously yet without fear And with my confidence all time high Swung the bat, against the sea of bowling enemy Shouting and threatening calls of dread Yet, to embrace the moment of execution I, with my duty, stepped in to the challenge
anonymous
  • anonymous
*couldn't have been
anonymous
  • anonymous
How do you like my rephrasing?
anonymous
  • anonymous
Gotta love poetry eh?
anonymous
  • anonymous
Just play around with "the" and change it to however you like
anonymous
  • anonymous
My dream come true in this day of cricket game Amid the applaud of jam packed crowd I, with full determination, stepped in to show The ever lasting dread of my enemy willing to gnaw Embracing my confidence all time high In this day of challenge never up I give With bat on my side, with pitcher on the other The battle of focus between the us two Summoning the incredulous bravery of spirit I, with full eagle, plunge into the deed.
anonymous
  • anonymous
How do you make out of that one?
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
nice!!
anonymous
  • anonymous
I am glad my friend! Choose which ever you feel like it.
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
@Robert136 thnx a lot
anonymous
  • anonymous
Anytime
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
@Robert136 Iam goona choose this one because it makes more sence but the problem is that I need one more sentence for it like they are 9 sentences I need 10!!
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
For this one The day game for cricket could have been better Even more so with the crowd packed in the Stadium As if to summon the kingdom, the bat on my side I walked forward anxiously yet without fear And with my confidence all time high Swung the bat, against the sea of bowling enemy Shouting and threatening calls of dread Yet, to embrace the moment of execution I, with my duty, stepped in to the challenge
anonymous
  • anonymous
To the eventual success yet to be made.
anonymous
  • anonymous
This is the last one.
anonymous
  • anonymous
Add it to the poem
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
ok
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
what be a good topic for it
anonymous
  • anonymous
The judgement day
anonymous
  • anonymous
lol I am so flashy today
anonymous
  • anonymous
The Judgment Day
anonymous
  • anonymous
Just to be clear on capitalization
anonymous
  • anonymous
I bet you will get A+ lol
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
so the topic be the judgement day right
anonymous
  • anonymous
yup
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
the last question be that how can I write a reflective journal of approximately 200 words in which you discuss the word choices you made and what effect you wanted to achieve.
anonymous
  • anonymous
Ok. Do you want me to give you a sample?
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
ok sure
anonymous
  • anonymous
Are you trying to make a poem, @MTALHAHASSAN2?
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
yes
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
I already make one
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
@Robert136 help me a lot
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
can you plz look at if you don't mind
anonymous
  • anonymous
@MTALHAHASSAN2 Where are you from?
anonymous
  • anonymous
ok
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
Pakistan
anonymous
  • anonymous
One hour ahead of me, ok
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
where u from
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
But I live in Canada
anonymous
  • anonymous
Pakistan as well, but I live in Dubai
anonymous
  • anonymous
Haha
anonymous
  • anonymous
I personally dedicate this poem as a memoir to my cricket game. Throughout the poem I ensured that each word picked carries a connotative significance. For example, the title "Judgement Day" provokes a feeling of tension as I face the adversity which stood in front of me. Moreover "packed with crowd" in the Stadium implies that I am being watched by thousands of people expecting me to perform. Amid the fear of failure I had word the poem in a risky way which may possibly come off as overly melodramatic however to those with similar experience would resonate. As such the conclusion of poem leaves a piece of foreshadowing to be done as the reader would ponder what happened after the conclusion, and such is my ambiguity and ambivalence of my poem, which will peg my memory in the board of life which now I have worked hard to keep.
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
I like to live in dubai
anonymous
  • anonymous
Guys take that I bet that's super duper melodramatic
anonymous
  • anonymous
:D
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
@Robert136 where u from
anonymous
  • anonymous
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anonymous
  • anonymous
Canada
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
really
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
Which province
anonymous
  • anonymous
Ontario
anonymous
  • anonymous
Why ask?
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
because I also live in Canada
anonymous
  • anonymous
nice.
anonymous
  • anonymous
we'd make good friends
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
lol it is the same province man
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
which city
anonymous
  • anonymous
toronto area
anonymous
  • anonymous
by the way how did you like the reflection?
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
I live in Mississauga
anonymous
  • anonymous
my brain is on fire today with English
anonymous
  • anonymous
nice.
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
that's good
anonymous
  • anonymous
glad you found it as such
anonymous
  • anonymous
I struggle with computer science
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
let me read that
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
in which university are you
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
In english the most thing which I hate is the poem
anonymous
  • anonymous
lol poem is like being a drama girl
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
its take a lot of time to understand
anonymous
  • anonymous
and I love it
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
idk for me its hard
anonymous
  • anonymous
well, it takes time and practice
anonymous
  • anonymous
learn spanish
anonymous
  • anonymous
makes it easier to understand english
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
do we have to learn poem in Uni
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
University
anonymous
  • anonymous
no
anonymous
  • anonymous
you can take a course on pornography
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
good
anonymous
  • anonymous
XD
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
but then why they teach poem in high school
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
waste to time
anonymous
  • anonymous
so that they can masturbate more effectively with better imagination
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
of
anonymous
  • anonymous
just kidding
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
@MANaALASKer how is study in dubai
anonymous
  • anonymous
Hey does anyone here know how to use the Java program? I literally suck
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
sorry I don't
anonymous
  • anonymous
no problem
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
@Robert136 do you read a novel called brick lane
anonymous
  • anonymous
Nope
anonymous
  • anonymous
no sorry
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
ok
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
@Robert136 I need little bit for journey about it so what can I include
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
more
anonymous
  • anonymous
^^ btw, nice poem
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
@bubbleslove1234 the question is that I have to write a short poem of approximately 10 lines describing an important event (either personal or historical) or an emotional state of mind using rich, connotative language which I almost finish but I wanna show you my that poem!!
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
Here is my poem: The Judgment Day The day game for cricket could have been better Even more so with the crowd packed in the Stadium As if to summon the kingdom, the bat on my side I walked forward anxiously yet without fear And with my confidence all time high Swung the bat, against the sea of bowling enemy Shouting and threatening calls of dread Yet, to embrace the moment of execution I, with my duty, stepped in to the challenge To the eventual success yet has to be made.
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
@Abhisar
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
@imqwerty
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
Is it a good poem?
imqwerty
  • imqwerty
tbh idk ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
its about a cricket match
imqwerty
  • imqwerty
@UsukiDoll
UsukiDoll
  • UsukiDoll
@imqwerty idk either .
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
lol but are you familar with the poems
imqwerty
  • imqwerty
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MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
what is that
imqwerty
  • imqwerty
Thats jst - ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ ^
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
o hello I need help
Michele_Laino
  • Michele_Laino
I'm very sorry, I'm not good with writing
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
@Michele_Laino the question is that I have to write a short poem of approximately 10 lines describing an important event (either personal or historical) or an emotional state of mind using rich, connotative language which I almost finish but I wanna show you my that poem!!
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
oh ok
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
@Rushwr's
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
1 Attachment
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
@bubbleslove1234 check that document
anonymous
  • anonymous
i personlly thought it was amazing bacause of the details you used
anonymous
  • anonymous
well do you think that it needs anything
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
Idk
anonymous
  • anonymous
i think it is great
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
but I have to make my paragraph with 200 word
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
that's only 150
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
I need 50 more words
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
but I don't what to write more
anonymous
  • anonymous
well than make the sentences longer.....but you dont want to make it to boring
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
but then what can I do
anonymous
  • anonymous
gtg be back
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
ok

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