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MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Need help with my poem!!
MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Need help with my poem!!

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MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0here is my poem: It was a nice Sunny day for playing cricket The Stadium was packed with the crowd I was next to bat, so I walked forward anxiously, Fearfully yet fearlessly, And I confidently swung the bat, and bamn! But the other side bowling team trying to make me nervous. but I make my selfbelieve very high, confidence. And handling the pressure well

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0can someone plz look at my poem!!

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Man dude that looks incredibly awesome.

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0ok thnx but do you wanna give me any advice where I want any change

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Yeah sure leave me to it

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0So that I can make it more better

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0The day game for cricket could have been better Even more so with the crowd packed in the Stadium As if to summon the kingdom, the bat on my side I walked forward anxiously yet without fear And with my confidence all time high Swung the bat, against the sea of bowling enemy Shouting and threatening calls of dread Yet, to embrace the moment of execution I, with my duty, stepped in to the challenge

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0How do you like my rephrasing?

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Gotta love poetry eh?

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Just play around with "the" and change it to however you like

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0My dream come true in this day of cricket game Amid the applaud of jam packed crowd I, with full determination, stepped in to show The ever lasting dread of my enemy willing to gnaw Embracing my confidence all time high In this day of challenge never up I give With bat on my side, with pitcher on the other The battle of focus between the us two Summoning the incredulous bravery of spirit I, with full eagle, plunge into the deed.

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0How do you make out of that one?

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0I am glad my friend! Choose which ever you feel like it.

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0@Robert136 thnx a lot

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0@Robert136 Iam goona choose this one because it makes more sence but the problem is that I need one more sentence for it like they are 9 sentences I need 10!!

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0For this one The day game for cricket could have been better Even more so with the crowd packed in the Stadium As if to summon the kingdom, the bat on my side I walked forward anxiously yet without fear And with my confidence all time high Swung the bat, against the sea of bowling enemy Shouting and threatening calls of dread Yet, to embrace the moment of execution I, with my duty, stepped in to the challenge

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0To the eventual success yet to be made.

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0This is the last one.

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0what be a good topic for it

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0lol I am so flashy today

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Just to be clear on capitalization

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0I bet you will get A+ lol

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0so the topic be the judgement day right

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0the last question be that how can I write a reflective journal of approximately 200 words in which you discuss the word choices you made and what effect you wanted to achieve.

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Ok. Do you want me to give you a sample?

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Are you trying to make a poem, @MTALHAHASSAN2?

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0I already make one

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0@Robert136 help me a lot

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0can you plz look at if you don't mind

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0@MTALHAHASSAN2 Where are you from?

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0One hour ahead of me, ok

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0But I live in Canada

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Pakistan as well, but I live in Dubai

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0I personally dedicate this poem as a memoir to my cricket game. Throughout the poem I ensured that each word picked carries a connotative significance. For example, the title "Judgement Day" provokes a feeling of tension as I face the adversity which stood in front of me. Moreover "packed with crowd" in the Stadium implies that I am being watched by thousands of people expecting me to perform. Amid the fear of failure I had word the poem in a risky way which may possibly come off as overly melodramatic however to those with similar experience would resonate. As such the conclusion of poem leaves a piece of foreshadowing to be done as the reader would ponder what happened after the conclusion, and such is my ambiguity and ambivalence of my poem, which will peg my memory in the board of life which now I have worked hard to keep.

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0I like to live in dubai

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Guys take that I bet that's super duper melodramatic

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0@Robert136 where u from

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0dw:1438523522202:dw

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0because I also live in Canada

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0we'd make good friends

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0lol it is the same province man

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0by the way how did you like the reflection?

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0I live in Mississauga

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0my brain is on fire today with English

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0glad you found it as such

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0I struggle with computer science

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0let me read that

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0in which university are you

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0In english the most thing which I hate is the poem

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0lol poem is like being a drama girl

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0its take a lot of time to understand

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0idk for me its hard

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0well, it takes time and practice

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0makes it easier to understand english

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0do we have to learn poem in Uni

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0you can take a course on pornography

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0but then why they teach poem in high school

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0so that they can masturbate more effectively with better imagination

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0@MANaALASKer how is study in dubai

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Hey does anyone here know how to use the Java program? I literally suck

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0@Robert136 do you read a novel called brick lane

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0@Robert136 I need little bit for journey about it so what can I include

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0@bubbleslove1234 the question is that I have to write a short poem of approximately 10 lines describing an important event (either personal or historical) or an emotional state of mind using rich, connotative language which I almost finish but I wanna show you my that poem!!

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Here is my poem: The Judgment Day The day game for cricket could have been better Even more so with the crowd packed in the Stadium As if to summon the kingdom, the bat on my side I walked forward anxiously yet without fear And with my confidence all time high Swung the bat, against the sea of bowling enemy Shouting and threatening calls of dread Yet, to embrace the moment of execution I, with my duty, stepped in to the challenge To the eventual success yet has to be made.

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Is it a good poem?

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0its about a cricket match

UsukiDoll
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0@imqwerty idk either .

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0lol but are you familar with the poems

imqwerty
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0\[ \begin{array}l\color{red}{\text{(}}\color{orange}{\text{ツ}}\color{#E6E600}{\text{)}}\color{green}{\text{}}\end{array} \]

imqwerty
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Thats jst  ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ ^

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0o hello I need help

Michele_Laino
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0I'm very sorry, I'm not good with writing

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0@Michele_Laino the question is that I have to write a short poem of approximately 10 lines describing an important event (either personal or historical) or an emotional state of mind using rich, connotative language which I almost finish but I wanna show you my that poem!!

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0@bubbleslove1234 check that document

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0i personlly thought it was amazing bacause of the details you used

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0well do you think that it needs anything

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0but I have to make my paragraph with 200 word

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0I need 50 more words

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0but I don't what to write more

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0well than make the sentences longer.....but you dont want to make it to boring

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0but then what can I do
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