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Need help with my poem!!

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  1. MTALHAHASSAN2
    • one year ago
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    here is my poem: It was a nice Sunny day for playing cricket The Stadium was packed with the crowd I was next to bat, so I walked forward anxiously, Fearfully yet fearlessly, And I confidently swung the bat, and bamn! But the other side bowling team trying to make me nervous. but I make my self-believe very high, confidence. And handling the pressure well

  2. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    can someone plz look at my poem!!

  3. anonymous
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    Man dude that looks incredibly awesome.

  4. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    ok thnx but do you wanna give me any advice where I want any change

  5. anonymous
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    Yeah sure leave me to it

  6. MTALHAHASSAN2
    • one year ago
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    So that I can make it more better

  7. anonymous
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    The day game for cricket could have been better Even more so with the crowd packed in the Stadium As if to summon the kingdom, the bat on my side I walked forward anxiously yet without fear And with my confidence all time high Swung the bat, against the sea of bowling enemy Shouting and threatening calls of dread Yet, to embrace the moment of execution I, with my duty, stepped in to the challenge

  8. anonymous
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    *couldn't have been

  9. anonymous
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    How do you like my rephrasing?

  10. anonymous
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    Gotta love poetry eh?

  11. anonymous
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    Just play around with "the" and change it to however you like

  12. anonymous
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    My dream come true in this day of cricket game Amid the applaud of jam packed crowd I, with full determination, stepped in to show The ever lasting dread of my enemy willing to gnaw Embracing my confidence all time high In this day of challenge never up I give With bat on my side, with pitcher on the other The battle of focus between the us two Summoning the incredulous bravery of spirit I, with full eagle, plunge into the deed.

  13. anonymous
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    How do you make out of that one?

  14. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    nice!!

  15. anonymous
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    I am glad my friend! Choose which ever you feel like it.

  16. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    @Robert136 thnx a lot

  17. anonymous
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    Anytime

  18. MTALHAHASSAN2
    • one year ago
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    @Robert136 Iam goona choose this one because it makes more sence but the problem is that I need one more sentence for it like they are 9 sentences I need 10!!

  19. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    For this one The day game for cricket could have been better Even more so with the crowd packed in the Stadium As if to summon the kingdom, the bat on my side I walked forward anxiously yet without fear And with my confidence all time high Swung the bat, against the sea of bowling enemy Shouting and threatening calls of dread Yet, to embrace the moment of execution I, with my duty, stepped in to the challenge

  20. anonymous
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    To the eventual success yet to be made.

  21. anonymous
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    This is the last one.

  22. anonymous
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    Add it to the poem

  23. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    ok

  24. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    what be a good topic for it

  25. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    The judgement day

  26. anonymous
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    lol I am so flashy today

  27. anonymous
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    The Judgment Day

  28. anonymous
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    Just to be clear on capitalization

  29. anonymous
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    I bet you will get A+ lol

  30. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    so the topic be the judgement day right

  31. anonymous
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    yup

  32. MTALHAHASSAN2
    • one year ago
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    the last question be that how can I write a reflective journal of approximately 200 words in which you discuss the word choices you made and what effect you wanted to achieve.

  33. anonymous
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    Ok. Do you want me to give you a sample?

  34. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    ok sure

  35. anonymous
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    Are you trying to make a poem, @MTALHAHASSAN2?

  36. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    yes

  37. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    I already make one

  38. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    @Robert136 help me a lot

  39. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    can you plz look at if you don't mind

  40. anonymous
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    @MTALHAHASSAN2 Where are you from?

  41. anonymous
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    ok

  42. MTALHAHASSAN2
    • one year ago
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    Pakistan

  43. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    One hour ahead of me, ok

  44. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    where u from

  45. MTALHAHASSAN2
    • one year ago
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    But I live in Canada

  46. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    Pakistan as well, but I live in Dubai

  47. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    Haha

  48. anonymous
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    I personally dedicate this poem as a memoir to my cricket game. Throughout the poem I ensured that each word picked carries a connotative significance. For example, the title "Judgement Day" provokes a feeling of tension as I face the adversity which stood in front of me. Moreover "packed with crowd" in the Stadium implies that I am being watched by thousands of people expecting me to perform. Amid the fear of failure I had word the poem in a risky way which may possibly come off as overly melodramatic however to those with similar experience would resonate. As such the conclusion of poem leaves a piece of foreshadowing to be done as the reader would ponder what happened after the conclusion, and such is my ambiguity and ambivalence of my poem, which will peg my memory in the board of life which now I have worked hard to keep.

  49. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    I like to live in dubai

  50. anonymous
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    Guys take that I bet that's super duper melodramatic

  51. anonymous
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    :D

  52. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    @Robert136 where u from

  53. anonymous
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    |dw:1438523522202:dw|

  54. anonymous
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    Canada

  55. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    really

  56. MTALHAHASSAN2
    • one year ago
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    Which province

  57. anonymous
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    Ontario

  58. anonymous
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    Why ask?

  59. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    because I also live in Canada

  60. anonymous
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    nice.

  61. anonymous
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    we'd make good friends

  62. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    lol it is the same province man

  63. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    which city

  64. anonymous
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    toronto area

  65. anonymous
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    by the way how did you like the reflection?

  66. MTALHAHASSAN2
    • one year ago
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    I live in Mississauga

  67. anonymous
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    my brain is on fire today with English

  68. anonymous
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    nice.

  69. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    that's good

  70. anonymous
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    glad you found it as such

  71. anonymous
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    I struggle with computer science

  72. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    let me read that

  73. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    in which university are you

  74. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    In english the most thing which I hate is the poem

  75. anonymous
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    lol poem is like being a drama girl

  76. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    its take a lot of time to understand

  77. anonymous
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    and I love it

  78. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    idk for me its hard

  79. anonymous
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    well, it takes time and practice

  80. anonymous
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    learn spanish

  81. anonymous
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    makes it easier to understand english

  82. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    do we have to learn poem in Uni

  83. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    University

  84. anonymous
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    no

  85. anonymous
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    you can take a course on pornography

  86. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    good

  87. anonymous
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    XD

  88. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    but then why they teach poem in high school

  89. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    waste to time

  90. anonymous
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    so that they can masturbate more effectively with better imagination

  91. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    of

  92. anonymous
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    just kidding

  93. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    @MANaALASKer how is study in dubai

  94. anonymous
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    Hey does anyone here know how to use the Java program? I literally suck

  95. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    sorry I don't

  96. anonymous
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    no problem

  97. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    @Robert136 do you read a novel called brick lane

  98. anonymous
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    Nope

  99. anonymous
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    no sorry

  100. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    ok

  101. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    @Robert136 I need little bit for journey about it so what can I include

  102. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    more

  103. anonymous
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    ^^ btw, nice poem

  104. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    @bubbleslove1234 the question is that I have to write a short poem of approximately 10 lines describing an important event (either personal or historical) or an emotional state of mind using rich, connotative language which I almost finish but I wanna show you my that poem!!

  105. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    Here is my poem: The Judgment Day The day game for cricket could have been better Even more so with the crowd packed in the Stadium As if to summon the kingdom, the bat on my side I walked forward anxiously yet without fear And with my confidence all time high Swung the bat, against the sea of bowling enemy Shouting and threatening calls of dread Yet, to embrace the moment of execution I, with my duty, stepped in to the challenge To the eventual success yet has to be made.

  106. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    @Abhisar

  107. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    @imqwerty

  108. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    Is it a good poem?

  109. imqwerty
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    tbh idk ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

  110. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    its about a cricket match

  111. imqwerty
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    @UsukiDoll

  112. UsukiDoll
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    @imqwerty idk either .

  113. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    lol but are you familar with the poems

  114. imqwerty
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    \[ \begin{array}l\color{red}{\text{(}}\color{orange}{\text{ツ}}\color{#E6E600}{\text{)}}\color{green}{\text{}}\end{array} \]

  115. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    what is that

  116. imqwerty
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    Thats jst - ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ ^

  117. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    o hello I need help

  118. Michele_Laino
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    I'm very sorry, I'm not good with writing

  119. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    @Michele_Laino the question is that I have to write a short poem of approximately 10 lines describing an important event (either personal or historical) or an emotional state of mind using rich, connotative language which I almost finish but I wanna show you my that poem!!

  120. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    oh ok

  121. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    @Rushwr's

  122. MTALHAHASSAN2
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  123. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    @bubbleslove1234 check that document

  124. anonymous
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    i personlly thought it was amazing bacause of the details you used

  125. anonymous
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    well do you think that it needs anything

  126. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    Idk

  127. anonymous
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    i think it is great

  128. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    but I have to make my paragraph with 200 word

  129. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    that's only 150

  130. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    I need 50 more words

  131. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    but I don't what to write more

  132. anonymous
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    well than make the sentences longer.....but you dont want to make it to boring

  133. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    but then what can I do

  134. anonymous
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    gtg be back

  135. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    ok

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