Need help with my poem!!

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Here is my poem: The day game for cricket could have been better Even more so with the crowd packed in the Stadium As if to summon the kingdom, the bat on my side I walked forward anxiously yet without fear And with my confidence all time high Swung the bat, against the sea of bowling enemy Shouting and threatening calls of dread Yet, to embrace the moment of execution I, with my duty, stepped in to the challenge To the eventual success yet has to be made.
its my personal poem and its about a cricket match
It's a really good poem

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ok thnx
I didn't really do anything but okay
So basically I have to write a short poem of approximately 10 lines describing an important event (either personal or historical) or an emotional state of mind using rich, connotative language. Then write a reflective journal of approximately 200 words in which you discuss the word choices you made and what effect you wanted to achieve.
I finish the poem and I need help with my reflection journey
I write some of it but I need more detail on it
So what do you have so far?
I personally dedicate this poem as a memoir to my cricket game. Throughout the poem I ensured that each word picked carries a connotative significance. For example, the title "Judgement Day" provokes a feeling of tension as I face the adversity which stood in front of me. Moreover "packed with crowd" in the Stadium implies that I am being watched by thousands of people expecting me to perform. Amid the fear of failure I had word the poem in a risky way which may possibly come off as overly melodramatic however to those with similar experience would resonate. As such the conclusion of poem leaves a piece of foreshadowing to be done as the reader would ponder what happened after the conclusion, and such is my ambiguity and ambivalence of my poem, which will peg my memory in the board of life which now I have worked hard to keep.
@nono266 are you good with poem?
can someone help me plz
sounds great to me!!
but u said in the reflection what the title was. did u put the title on the actual poem?
I do have a title
it is The Judgment Day
ok. then everything is good!
is it a good title thou
i was talking about on the poem
like above it
what?
This is my poem its title is the judgement Day The day game for cricket could have been better Even more so with the crowd packed in the Stadium As if to summon the kingdom, the bat on my side I walked forward anxiously yet without fear And with my confidence all time high Swung the bat, against the sea of bowling enemy Shouting and threatening calls of dread Yet, to embrace the moment of execution I, with my duty, stepped in to the challenge To the eventual success yet has to be made.
@muscrat123 I need help with my journey paragraph
sorry, i gtg
I personally dedicate this poem as a memoir to my cricket game. Throughout the poem I ensured that each word picked carries a connotative significance. For example, the title "Judgement Day" provokes a feeling of tension as I face the adversity which stood in front of me. Moreover "packed with crowd" in the Stadium implies that I am being watched by thousands of people expecting me to perform. Amid the fear of failure I had word the poem in a risky way which may possibly come off as overly melodramatic however to those with similar experience would resonate. As such the conclusion of poem leaves a piece of foreshadowing to be done as the reader would ponder what happened after the conclusion, and such is my ambiguity and ambivalence of my poem, which will peg my memory in the board of life which now I have worked hard to keep.
this is my journey paragraph but I need some for details
@jjamz87 are u there
hey i know you're working on your poem, but u think that u can give me some help
@mrlogic1 latter but help me first plz
Her is my journey paragraph but I need some more detail own it and I need your help: I personally dedicate this poem as a memoir to my cricket game. Throughout the poem I ensured that each word picked carries a connotative significance. For example, the title "Judgement Day" provokes a feeling of tension as I face the adversity which stood in front of me. Moreover "packed with crowd" in the Stadium implies that I am being watched by thousands of people expecting me to perform. Amid the fear of failure I had word the poem in a risky way which may possibly come off as overly melodramatic however to those with similar experience would resonate. As such the conclusion of poem leaves a piece of foreshadowing to be done as the reader would ponder what happened after the conclusion, and such is my ambiguity and ambivalence of my poem, which will peg my memory in the board of life which now I have worked hard to keep.
yea
need help!!
I need some more detail own my journey paragraph and I need your help:
The day game for cricket could have been better Even more so with the crowd packed in the stadium As if to summon the kingdom, the bat on my side I, walked forward anxiously yet without fear And with my confidence at an all time high, Swung the bat against the sea of bowling enemy Shouting and threatening calls of dread Yet, to embrace the moment of execution I, with my duty, stepped in to the challenge To the eventual success yet has to be made.
The day game for cricket could have been better Even more so with the crowd packed in the stadium As if to summon the kingdom, the bat on my side I, walked forward anxiously yet without fear And with my confidence at an all time high, Swung the bat against the sea of bowling enemy Shouting and threatening calls of dread Yet, to embrace the moment of execution I, with my duty, stepped in to the challenge To the eventual success that has yet to be made.
know can you help me with journey paragraph!!
The day game for cricket could have been better Even more so with the crowd packed in the stadium As if to summon the kingdom, the bat on my side I, walked forward anxiously yet without fear And with my confidence at an all time high, Swung the bat against the sea of bowling enemy Shouting and threatening calls of dread Yet, to embrace the moment of execution I, with my duty, stepped in to the challenge To the eventual success that after success to be made.
know is it fine
Here is my poem: The day game for cricket could have been better Even more so with the crowd packed in the stadium As if to summon the kingdom, the bat on my side I, walked forward anxiously yet without fear And with my confidence at an all time high, Swung the bat against the sea of bowling enemy Shouting and threatening calls of dread Yet, to embrace the moment of execution I, with my duty, stepped in to the challenge To the eventual success that after success to be made.
Here is my journey paragraph but I need some more detail own it and I need your help I personally dedicate this poem as a memoir to my cricket game. Throughout the poem I ensured that each word picked carries a connotative significance. For example, the title "Judgement Day" provokes a feeling of tension as I face the adversity which stood in front of me. Moreover "packed with crowd" in the Stadium implies that I am being watched by thousands of people expecting me to perform. Amid the fear of failure I had word the poem in a risky way which may possibly come off as overly melodramatic however to those with similar experience would resonate. As such the conclusion of poem leaves a piece of foreshadowing to be done as the reader would ponder what happened after the conclusion, and such is my ambiguity and ambivalence of my poem, which will peg my memory in the board of life which now I have worked hard to keep.
hey sorry but were u put I had word the poem I think it should be worded the poem
I already told the poem words in my journey
Bro I promise my work is golden here. Ignore the helpless kids trying to get a free medal and when I think it's good that means it's good because I was the third top in my Grade 12 English U ENG4U course before graduation.
I ended up with an 83 so trust me it's all good.
@Robert136 I appreciate your help and I know its all fine here but the problem is that my english teacher wants my journey paragraph to be in 200 work so because of that I need some more information in my paragraph that what I am looking for
200 word
@Robert136 what can i include more in my paragraph

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