MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
can someone plz look at my grammar
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katieb
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MTALHAHASSAN2
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Hamlet is one of the most famous tragedy plays written by William Shakespeare's at an uncertain date between1599 and 1602. In this play, Hamlet has faced a lot of difficult task thought out this play as he saying “There is nothing either good or bad, but thinking makes it so.” The hamlet play also make some connections with the world it came from suck as like in the previous days when any kind died, then they choose other kind who have some relationship with the previous kind. Basically in those days, in Denmark, the new king was chosen by a combination of factors so at that time the Hamlet was not that older to be a kind, but then the Claudius the previous king brother use this advantages and become the new king. But the more influence comes in the play, when the previous kind wife Gertrude decided to marriage with a new king Claudius which make Hamlet more angry and from that point he try to think that maybe his uncle kill his father. As one of the quotation from the play, making some connection with the world from where it comes from “To be honest, as this world goes, is to be one man picked out of ten thousand.” This quotation is describing that there's so much dishonesty in the way we live in this world, finding someone who's honest is like one in a million.
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
so basically i am connecting the hamlet play with the that time world
anonymous
  • anonymous
Should it be "Hamlet has faced a lot of difficult tasks throughout this play"?

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anonymous
  • anonymous
do you want spelling mistakes to? or no
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
yes i do
anonymous
  • anonymous
Okay you wrote suck instead of such
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
@marymiller do you read a novel hamlet
anonymous
  • anonymous
Sorry what
anonymous
  • anonymous
the new king was chosen by a combination of factors so at that time the Hamlet was not that older to be a kind, but then the Claudius the previous king brother use this advantages and become the new king. Its just my opinion but this sentence doesn't make much sense
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
so what you want me to change here
anonymous
  • anonymous
I think it just needs a little bit of revising
anonymous
  • anonymous
Its just a bit of a run on sentence which is what makes it hard to follow
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
so how it be look like then
anonymous
  • anonymous
is kind supposed to be king?
anonymous
  • anonymous
the new king was chosen by a combination of factors. At that time the Hamlet was not old enough to be a king. Claudius, the previous kings brother used this to his advantage and became the new king. Does this make sense?
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
yes
anonymous
  • anonymous
Okay one second I'll revise the whole paragraph
anonymous
  • anonymous
I think you changed king to kind every time
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
i changed it
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
no worry
anonymous
  • anonymous
Hamlet is one of the most famous tragedy plays written by William Shakespeare's at an uncertain date between 1599 and 1602. In the play, Hamlet faced a lot of difficult tasks throughout this play. He said “There is nothing either good or bad, but thinking makes it so.” The hamlet play also make some connections with the world it came from such as in the previous days when any king died, they choose others to be king who had some relationship with the previous one such as a son or a nephew. Basically, in those days in Denmark, the new king was chosen by a combination of factors so at that time the new king was chosen by a combination of factors. At that time the Hamlet was not old enough to be a king. Claudius, the previous kings brother used this to his advantage and became the new king. But the more influence comes in the play, when the previous kings wife, Gertrude, decided to a marriage with a new king Claudius. This angered Hamlet and from that point he started to think that maybe his uncle killed his father. As one of the quotation from the play, making some connection with the world from where it comes from “To be honest, as this world goes, is to be one man picked out of ten thousand.” This quotation is describing that there's so much dishonesty in the way we live in this world, finding someone who's honest is like one in a million.
anonymous
  • anonymous
This is the revised paragraph. Just to help out a little bit. You should refrain from using the word "like" when you can avoid it
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
@marymiller thnx a lot
anonymous
  • anonymous
No problem
anonymous
  • anonymous
Hamlet was anger and jealous because he was not next in line to be crowed king
anonymous
  • anonymous
@deitalion It wasn't just about not being king
MTALHAHASSAN2
  • MTALHAHASSAN2
thnx a lot and bye
anonymous
  • anonymous
You do know you can go to Microsoft Word, paste that whole writing in and check any grammar mistakes and it will fix it instantly right? Just a quick tip.
anonymous
  • anonymous
@HelpMePlease1999 It won't help sentence structure though.. Or if you changed a word like in this situation "king" was changed to "kind" It wouldn't fix that

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