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MTALHAHASSAN2

  • one year ago

can someone plz look at my grammar

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  1. MTALHAHASSAN2
    • one year ago
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    Hamlet is one of the most famous tragedy plays written by William Shakespeare's at an uncertain date between1599 and 1602. In this play, Hamlet has faced a lot of difficult task thought out this play as he saying “There is nothing either good or bad, but thinking makes it so.” The hamlet play also make some connections with the world it came from suck as like in the previous days when any kind died, then they choose other kind who have some relationship with the previous kind. Basically in those days, in Denmark, the new king was chosen by a combination of factors so at that time the Hamlet was not that older to be a kind, but then the Claudius the previous king brother use this advantages and become the new king. But the more influence comes in the play, when the previous kind wife Gertrude decided to marriage with a new king Claudius which make Hamlet more angry and from that point he try to think that maybe his uncle kill his father. As one of the quotation from the play, making some connection with the world from where it comes from “To be honest, as this world goes, is to be one man picked out of ten thousand.” This quotation is describing that there's so much dishonesty in the way we live in this world, finding someone who's honest is like one in a million.

  2. MTALHAHASSAN2
    • one year ago
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    so basically i am connecting the hamlet play with the that time world

  3. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    Should it be "Hamlet has faced a lot of difficult tasks throughout this play"?

  4. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    do you want spelling mistakes to? or no

  5. MTALHAHASSAN2
    • one year ago
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    yes i do

  6. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    Okay you wrote suck instead of such

  7. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    @marymiller do you read a novel hamlet

  8. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    Sorry what

  9. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    the new king was chosen by a combination of factors so at that time the Hamlet was not that older to be a kind, but then the Claudius the previous king brother use this advantages and become the new king. Its just my opinion but this sentence doesn't make much sense

  10. MTALHAHASSAN2
    • one year ago
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    so what you want me to change here

  11. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    I think it just needs a little bit of revising

  12. anonymous
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    Its just a bit of a run on sentence which is what makes it hard to follow

  13. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    so how it be look like then

  14. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    is kind supposed to be king?

  15. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    the new king was chosen by a combination of factors. At that time the Hamlet was not old enough to be a king. Claudius, the previous kings brother used this to his advantage and became the new king. Does this make sense?

  16. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    yes

  17. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    Okay one second I'll revise the whole paragraph

  18. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    I think you changed king to kind every time

  19. MTALHAHASSAN2
    • one year ago
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    i changed it

  20. MTALHAHASSAN2
    • one year ago
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    no worry

  21. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    Hamlet is one of the most famous tragedy plays written by William Shakespeare's at an uncertain date between 1599 and 1602. In the play, Hamlet faced a lot of difficult tasks throughout this play. He said “There is nothing either good or bad, but thinking makes it so.” The hamlet play also make some connections with the world it came from such as in the previous days when any king died, they choose others to be king who had some relationship with the previous one such as a son or a nephew. Basically, in those days in Denmark, the new king was chosen by a combination of factors so at that time the new king was chosen by a combination of factors. At that time the Hamlet was not old enough to be a king. Claudius, the previous kings brother used this to his advantage and became the new king. But the more influence comes in the play, when the previous kings wife, Gertrude, decided to a marriage with a new king Claudius. This angered Hamlet and from that point he started to think that maybe his uncle killed his father. As one of the quotation from the play, making some connection with the world from where it comes from “To be honest, as this world goes, is to be one man picked out of ten thousand.” This quotation is describing that there's so much dishonesty in the way we live in this world, finding someone who's honest is like one in a million.

  22. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    This is the revised paragraph. Just to help out a little bit. You should refrain from using the word "like" when you can avoid it

  23. MTALHAHASSAN2
    • one year ago
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    @marymiller thnx a lot

  24. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    No problem

  25. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    Hamlet was anger and jealous because he was not next in line to be crowed king

  26. anonymous
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    @deitalion It wasn't just about not being king

  27. MTALHAHASSAN2
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    thnx a lot and bye

  28. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    You do know you can go to Microsoft Word, paste that whole writing in and check any grammar mistakes and it will fix it instantly right? Just a quick tip.

  29. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    @HelpMePlease1999 It won't help sentence structure though.. Or if you changed a word like in this situation "king" was changed to "kind" It wouldn't fix that

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