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anonymous

  • one year ago

Can someone please rewrite this introduction for me

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  1. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    Boom, boom, boom your heart is pounding faster than lightning drowning out the cheering people chanting your name. College athletes are considered to be amateurs but does this mean they should not get paid? All college athletes should get paid for their hard work, dedication, and sacrifices. Sacrifices such as their grades and not being able to get a job to support themselves, due to their lack of time

  2. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    ill try but i have a question Why did you start of like that if your talking abut college players getting paid

  3. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    ??

  4. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    I'll help, let me finish this assignment (i'm almost done) then i'll start helping you. :)

  5. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    ok thank you

  6. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    because they wanted a hook and thats all i could think of

  7. anonymous
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    Boom, boom, boom your heart is pounding faster than lightning drowning out the cheering people chanting your name. College athletes are considered to be amateurs but does that mean they should not get paid? All college athletes should get paid for their hard work, dedication, and sacrifices. Sacrifices such as their grades and not being able to get a job to support themselves, due to their lack of time. Their also bring in money to pay off the stadium.

  8. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    can i change the hook

  9. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    yes

  10. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    you didn't rewrite any of it except like the last sentence which doesn't even make since? @hype.child

  11. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    @isabellewaab can you help

  12. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    I didn't rewrite anything because it good and just need a better hook

  13. Jack1
    • one year ago
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    true ;)

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