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anonymous

  • one year ago

a poem. its a little bit different then my usual stuff but let me know what you think

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  1. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    The world sees an open window as an opportunity, Someone with depressions sees it only as an obstacle. We are what we eat, But we eat how we feel. Empty or disgusting. The world is your oyster. Sometimes there’s no pearls All the same sayings With a bit of a twist. It’s a matter of perspective. And yet somehow wrong. Because we could never understand each other If we never were truly there. Just because you wear the same shoes, Doesn’t mean the foot print will be the same copy. We are different Yet somehow the same Take things in the perspective of Understanding without knowing. We can beat each other But we can also be a stepping stone. Sometimes we need a crotch In order to keep moving forward.

  2. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    Great poem! Except, it is "Sometimes there ARE no pearls," since "pearls" is plural. :)

  3. geneticrockhopper247
    • one year ago
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    In the second to last line, you used "crotch" instead of crutch. Apart from that, this is fantastic!

  4. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    @barbiemull thanks

  5. anonymous
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    @geneticrockhopper247 thanks

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