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your eyes are like stars in the night sky twinkling so beautiful up above your hair fralics like silk in the wind oh im so glad your my love but your skin shines like the sun and your cheeks blossoms like a rose in the spring oh how my love for you has no bend but will you love me till earths end will you stick with me through earth harsh cold wind will you be ready to sin are you ready to throw it all away just to win again
i regret that i rip that i wrote this dont belive that ill freaking die just so i can forget that you said you loved my heart beat yeah well forget you i hope you end up in a ditch. imma try to mess you over real quick. becuase all those words you gave me was bullshiz no i regret all i gave you . now i sit here and try to misbehave you. i hope some on puts you in grave. dont even pretend you remebr my name. becuase of you i have gone so in sane. it hurts so bad somebody get rid of my brain. your hate has me in chains. i hope some one cuts out your membrain. i would apologize and cry you a river. but im sitting here alone and in a shiver. i dont even dare to give you a lip quiver. im so mad its like lava in my veins.
@beckyg111 @MeowLover17 @Loser66 @pooja195 @Teddyiswatshecallsme @TuringTest @Donblue @freegirl11112 @LiveLaughDie @badmood @Nicoleegilmoree @morgannaj98 @zepdrix @iloveyou;* @Rushwr @Baby_Bear69
tell me what you think plz
they are both awesome and I love them great job
thnx plz tag people if you can
They are Awesome!!
i will admit that the first one is a bit confusing and a little heavy in sensory details. but the second one is just wow...its beautiful, almost rythmatic. keep it up you're peoms are great
thnx alot and thnx for the open eye about the first one
please if you can tag your friends im writting peoms for some one and i need as much feedback as possible
@uybuyvf @Nnesha @aryandecoolest @BioHazard9064
@animalfan1 @DullJackel09 @yeval76
OMG You are wonderful! The best poems I have ever read... I actually understood and felt the feelings you tried to transmit with the words @Peaches15 @Loser66
thnx so much i apreciate your feed back i also do songs
thank you so much for the medals fam
I would love to see the songs that you wrote if I can.., That would be so cool.
You can message them to me
yes you will have to give me a minute
i also free style once in a blue moon
I like them :) good job! Well done:D
Nice job bro thumbs up 👍
i like it :)
Your not the only one @iloveyou;*
lol well of course im not the only one who likes it :) your point iiiiiiiisss?
Your the last to the party buddy everyone has already said the same thing
dosnt matter shes my girl so step down dawg
Well that's my bff so I don't wanna hear it best friends can say that stuff bro
Hey @Tazmaniadevil i think the second one needs work
Is it okay if i help?
sure pm it to me and ill tell you if i like your tune up better
dude ur awesome
thnx i also write song of many genres and i freestyle so if you need any help let me know
actually i need help with a love song
ok tag me fam
R.I.P. our hearts. I'll die so that I can forget us apart. You said you loved my heart, I used to love yours too. I hope you end up in a ditch. I will try to mess you over real quick. All those words you gave me was bullpellet. I regret all I gave you because now I sit here and try to misbehave you. I hope some on pushes you in grave, and dont even pretend you remember my name. Because of you I have gone so in sane, and hurts so bad somebody get rid of my ruined brain. Babe your hate has me in chains, pellet.. hope some one cuts out your membrain. I would apologize and cry you a river, but im sitting here alone and in a shiver. I dont dare to give you a lip quiver. R.I.P. Was it okay?
i love it good job
^ *Bull pellet
ughhhh im trying to write the bad word lol
no i really do it way better then mine
I love them both. Amazing! C:
thank you thank you vry much
Man it was really good
thnx bruv aye wanan rap battle