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anonymous

  • one year ago

Compare the bold sections of both sentences and then answer the question that follows: Original: My father disliked sleet, but my father disliked hail more. Revised: My father disliked sleet, but he hated hail more. What was done to the bolded section to improve the sentence?

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  1. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    What was done to the bolded section to improve the sentence? A longer phrase was converted to a single word. A modifier that did not add meaning was removed. Redundant phrases were eliminated. Repetitive words were replaced with synonyms and pronouns.

  2. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    D?

  3. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    I would agree

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