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As the author of this story, you can write about anything you choose. Your final story can be as short as half a page, but it must be a complete narrative with a beginning, middle, and end. Be sure to intentionally create pace with your sentence structure and include at least five lines of properly punctuated dialogue. -Grammar checking please

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  1. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    I feel a wet dampness in the middle of my palm. Opening my eyes, all I see is darkness corrupting me. Then my vision becomes clearer adjusting to the darkness. I feel my palm to discover the wet substance only to find out it is sweat. As I try to get up my legs give out and I'm paralyzed. My gut is telling me to run. Only if I could, I say to myself. Then a silvery voice follows.... “You’re going straight to my head, and I’m headed straight to the edge… I pick my poison and it’s you!” I recognize this immediately as my ringtone to my phone and shut eyes tight when I open them I’m in my bed room I think to myself that must be a dream. *the music continues to play from my ringtone on my phone* *Aero answers the phone*...”Hey who is this?” "Wow can you look at ur contacts name before you ask? ....IT’S YOUR BEST FRIEND DUHHH!" "Omg I'm sorry hey Charlie ....You know u woke me up?" There was a long pause before Aero heard sobbing on the other end. Aero: “Charlie what happened!?!?!? Are you ok? Answer me Charlie…!” “Ye….Yea…Yes Aero…” sobbed Charlie. “Tell me what’s going on…” “I will but I can’t say over the phone ill meet you at your house, be there soon!” As I wait for Charlie to come over I start to tidy up the house my parents are on a business trip so I have the whole house to myself. Showing that I can clean after myself is a great way to show responsibilities and prove to them that I can be an independent young lady. Not even after five minutes of me wiping the kitchen cabinets, I hear a knock. I jump up in surprised because I was so focused on cleaning I totally forgot Charlie was coming over. As I slow dragged myself to the door I checked the peephole of the door to make sure it was Charlie. When I opened the door she jumped on me caressing me in a warm hug with tears rolling down her face. She explains to me what happened- Her parents kicked her out because she didn’t complete her college credits so she didn’t have enough credits to finish her degree. We both sit down and I give her a shoulder to cry on and sympathy because I could remember how my parents were academically strict on me back then. After hugging her I explained to her that I’m going to order pizza she nodded yes. After calling up the Italian pizza place and ordering pizza I went to check on her and she was sleeping peacefully on the couch. I went upstairs to my room and started to reminisce how I met Charlie, we first met at a party my cousin introduced us and we hit it off ever since then. We started talking on the phone and hang out a lot until it became a daily routine. Now weeks later we call each other best friend. I still remember how this girl me and Charlie despised left me a note after the party saying –“Beware of Charlie…In due time you will know.”- I just laughed it off because Charlie is those type of quiet at first but funny and outspoken when you get to know her. Now that day seemed so distant compared to now. I have met Charlie whole family and seen how she has been treated throughout her life. She struggles when people don’t accept her for who she is even though she tries to mask her feelings. In the middle of me thinking I hear whispers in the distance. I can’t make out the words so I grab my bat under my bed and slowly and carefully tiptoe down the stairs when I get there I see the most unusual thing. Charlie was stuffing her face with pizza while watching Netflix and cuddling the couch pillow. The reason I say this is unusual is because Charlie is the type of girl that doesn’t eat if she does eat....it would probably be fruits or veggies.

  2. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    @WhateverYouSay

  3. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    Okay for the beginning. You need to take out the stars. You are making a book, not a play. And for this part ,"Wow can you look at ur contacts name before you ask? ....IT’S YOUR BEST FRIEND DUHHH!" try to mention the characters name, idk if it is the main character speaking or someone else.

  4. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    A story i mean.

  5. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    ...shut up no one asked you to be mean..but thank you I really needed this

  6. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    lol

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