A community for students.

Here's the question you clicked on:

55 members online
  • 0 replying
  • 0 viewing

help_people

  • one year ago

Coudld someone makw suggestions to this short story please?

  • This Question is Closed
  1. help_people
    • one year ago
    Best Response
    You've already chosen the best response.
    Medals 1

    @Teddyiswatshecallsme

  2. vera_ewing
    • one year ago
    Best Response
    You've already chosen the best response.
    Medals 0

    What exactly do you need help with?

  3. help_people
    • one year ago
    Best Response
    You've already chosen the best response.
    Medals 1

    hi @vera_ewing like suggestions on it i finsihed it but i need to make sure tht its good and amkes sense

  4. vera_ewing
    • one year ago
    Best Response
    You've already chosen the best response.
    Medals 0

    Where is this short story?

  5. help_people
    • one year ago
    Best Response
    You've already chosen the best response.
    Medals 1

    ill get it

  6. help_people
    • one year ago
    Best Response
    You've already chosen the best response.
    Medals 1

    @vera_ewing

  7. help_people
    • one year ago
    Best Response
    You've already chosen the best response.
    Medals 1

    @vera_ewing !!! OMG

  8. vera_ewing
    • one year ago
    Best Response
    You've already chosen the best response.
    Medals 0

    I can't download it.

  9. help_people
    • one year ago
    Best Response
    You've already chosen the best response.
    Medals 1

    ok

  10. help_people
    • one year ago
    Best Response
    You've already chosen the best response.
    Medals 1

    @vera_ewing

  11. help_people
    • one year ago
    Best Response
    You've already chosen the best response.
    Medals 1

    I open the key in the lock and opened the door. To my surprise, I envisioned a clean house. This is not how I left everything before! Where are my lucky diamond earrings? Where did all my clothes go? I switched on the light bulb. A shadow raced behind me. Running to the kitchen to grab a knife, I shouted, "Is anyone here:" No reply. I see two tall, sinister shadows in the living room. I couldn't catch a glimpse of what was going on, but it looked like they were whispering. Then. My house phone started ringing. It rang several times and then the ringing stopped. I heard a deep voice say, "Hello". The voice sounded like a man mid-30s. Then I heard another, "Hello". This voice sounded like a woman also mid-30s. I was scared to death, because two people were in my house whom I did not know! My worst nightmare was coming true. Looking back at the living room, one of the shadow’s pointed too the kitchen and started walking towards where I was. Without a moments glance, I raced upstairs. I ran to my room and locked the door. Thinking to myself, “Okay, stay calm. Do not freak out”. Suddenly, a BANG came from the door. I dragged the armoire from my room to hold the door shut. Then another THUD came from the door. The armoire fell over and ran into my back. I fell down. Crying with agony I couldn't come up. The armoire was too heavy. "Okay," I whispered myself "Push the table on 1. 2. 3." I leveraged my bodyweight to push the armoire against the door. An intense, sharp pain was now issuing from my arm. I knew that I had cracked my arm. The shadows started to hit the door with a hammer. Startled, I ran away from the door. Sitting on the floor I tucked my knees to my chest and closed my eyes. When I opened them the two shadows were standing in front of me. A gun was pointing right towards my head. With a tear rolling down my eyes, my last word was, "Goodbye". I open the key in the lock and opened the door. To my surprise, I see my body lying across the floor.

  12. help_people
    • one year ago
    Best Response
    You've already chosen the best response.
    Medals 1

    thats the only other way i could do it @vera_ewing @vera_ewing @vera_ewing

  13. anonymous
    • one year ago
    Best Response
    You've already chosen the best response.
    Medals 0

    lol

  14. help_people
    • one year ago
    Best Response
    You've already chosen the best response.
    Medals 1

    :( @TaylorBrooks137 serously

  15. help_people
    • one year ago
    Best Response
    You've already chosen the best response.
    Medals 1

    @vera_ewing

  16. help_people
    • one year ago
    Best Response
    You've already chosen the best response.
    Medals 1

    @vera_ewing

  17. KyanTheDoodle
    • one year ago
    Best Response
    You've already chosen the best response.
    Medals 0

    It's nice. Although perhaps you should cut back on the "to my surprise"'s.

  18. help_people
    • one year ago
    Best Response
    You've already chosen the best response.
    Medals 1

    oh thats the prompt and thank you!

  19. anonymous
    • one year ago
    Best Response
    You've already chosen the best response.
    Medals 0

    I would look up suggestions for short story on google

  20. help_people
    • one year ago
    Best Response
    You've already chosen the best response.
    Medals 1

    ok thank you all :D @TaylorBrooks137 @KyantheNoddle and I guess @vera_ewing

  21. Not the answer you are looking for?
    Search for more explanations.

    • Attachments:

Ask your own question

Sign Up
Find more explanations on OpenStudy
Privacy Policy

Your question is ready. Sign up for free to start getting answers.

spraguer (Moderator)
5 → View Detailed Profile

is replying to Can someone tell me what button the professor is hitting...

23

  • Teamwork 19 Teammate
  • Problem Solving 19 Hero
  • You have blocked this person.
  • ✔ You're a fan Checking fan status...

Thanks for being so helpful in mathematics. If you are getting quality help, make sure you spread the word about OpenStudy.

This is the testimonial you wrote.
You haven't written a testimonial for Owlfred.