help_people
  • help_people
Coudld someone makw suggestions to this short story please?
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schrodinger
  • schrodinger
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help_people
  • help_people
@Teddyiswatshecallsme
vera_ewing
  • vera_ewing
What exactly do you need help with?
help_people
  • help_people
hi @vera_ewing like suggestions on it i finsihed it but i need to make sure tht its good and amkes sense

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vera_ewing
  • vera_ewing
Where is this short story?
help_people
  • help_people
ill get it
help_people
  • help_people
@vera_ewing
help_people
  • help_people
@vera_ewing !!! OMG
vera_ewing
  • vera_ewing
I can't download it.
help_people
  • help_people
ok
help_people
  • help_people
@vera_ewing
help_people
  • help_people
I open the key in the lock and opened the door. To my surprise, I envisioned a clean house. This is not how I left everything before! Where are my lucky diamond earrings? Where did all my clothes go? I switched on the light bulb. A shadow raced behind me. Running to the kitchen to grab a knife, I shouted, "Is anyone here:" No reply. I see two tall, sinister shadows in the living room. I couldn't catch a glimpse of what was going on, but it looked like they were whispering. Then. My house phone started ringing. It rang several times and then the ringing stopped. I heard a deep voice say, "Hello". The voice sounded like a man mid-30s. Then I heard another, "Hello". This voice sounded like a woman also mid-30s. I was scared to death, because two people were in my house whom I did not know! My worst nightmare was coming true. Looking back at the living room, one of the shadow’s pointed too the kitchen and started walking towards where I was. Without a moments glance, I raced upstairs. I ran to my room and locked the door. Thinking to myself, “Okay, stay calm. Do not freak out”. Suddenly, a BANG came from the door. I dragged the armoire from my room to hold the door shut. Then another THUD came from the door. The armoire fell over and ran into my back. I fell down. Crying with agony I couldn't come up. The armoire was too heavy. "Okay," I whispered myself "Push the table on 1. 2. 3." I leveraged my bodyweight to push the armoire against the door. An intense, sharp pain was now issuing from my arm. I knew that I had cracked my arm. The shadows started to hit the door with a hammer. Startled, I ran away from the door. Sitting on the floor I tucked my knees to my chest and closed my eyes. When I opened them the two shadows were standing in front of me. A gun was pointing right towards my head. With a tear rolling down my eyes, my last word was, "Goodbye". I open the key in the lock and opened the door. To my surprise, I see my body lying across the floor.
help_people
  • help_people
thats the only other way i could do it @vera_ewing @vera_ewing @vera_ewing
anonymous
  • anonymous
lol
help_people
  • help_people
:( @TaylorBrooks137 serously
help_people
  • help_people
@vera_ewing
help_people
  • help_people
@vera_ewing
KyanTheDoodle
  • KyanTheDoodle
It's nice. Although perhaps you should cut back on the "to my surprise"'s.
help_people
  • help_people
oh thats the prompt and thank you!
anonymous
  • anonymous
I would look up suggestions for short story on google
help_people
  • help_people
ok thank you all :D @TaylorBrooks137 @KyantheNoddle and I guess @vera_ewing

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