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anonymous

  • one year ago

The Girl Who Leads Me The world is dark like always. I can feel a hand leading me. Her voice is sharp and I hate it. I hate her. I have to trust her. She is the girl who leads me.

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  1. anonymous
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  2. kohai
    • one year ago
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    It's nice and simple. I'd format it more like a poem, though. Leave out punctuation and make each line it's own line, like this. The Girl Who Leads Me The world is dark like always I can feel a hand leading me Her voice is sharp and I hate it I hate her I have to trust her She is the girl who leads me

  3. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    Its only a rough draft I'm working on fixing it so...

  4. kohai
    • one year ago
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    I understand. I would focus on the word choice etc and make it more flowery. But if you're writing a poem, it should be formatted like a poem, you know? :) Great job so far. I'm terrible at writing poetry, your draft is way better than what I could do lol

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