Kitten_is_back
  • Kitten_is_back
is this righ ttho ?
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Kitten_is_back
  • Kitten_is_back
I think that Trump is racists and a jerk .in my opinion i believe that trump does need to get beat up for being racists . because he was saying rude things about Africa Americas . in my opinion he wanting Hispanic vote not Africa america voting.Making it not about Obama but trying to compare america to others .Insulating Africa Americas and black people . Calling out Obama for just attention and popular. Calling Obama a cheerleader. Calling Obama a shame to Africa citations . saying Obama has set a low bar for Africa Americas FOR trump paper
anonymous
  • anonymous
It is best to clean up and edit your paper in a few different ways. #1 is for a few minor spelling/grammar errors. #2 is to add a few more facts about Trump. #3 is to possibly make your paper longer (unless this assignment calls for a short essay). "because he was saying rude things about Africa Americas . in my opinion he wanting Hispanic vote not Africa america voting.Making it not about Obama but trying to compare america to others .Insulating Africa Americas and black people," needs to be cleaned up quite a bit. A few hints for polishing this paragraph is: Capitalization, Commas, and full sentences. I notice that there are a lot of sentence fragments, such as "in my opinion he wanting Hispanic vote not Africa america voting." A way to correct this is "In my opinion, Trump not wanting Hispanics instead of African Americans to vote is cruel and a form of segregation." Also, with "because he was saying rude things about Africa Americas . in my opinion he wanting Hispanic vote not Africa america voting.Making it not about Obama but trying to compare america to others .Insulating Africa Americas and black people," you should add commas instead of periods, since the periods are making this paragraph seem like an array of sentence fragments. Now, to #2. In reports, you should tell more about Donald Trump and his life. Though I do agree that he is an awful person, opinions are usually not advisable in reports about people. You may add a few, but things such as "I believe that Trump needs to get beat up for being racist" is not a very appropriate thing to say. I also would advise you to state Trump's full name, as that is professional. Anyways, good luck on your paper~! If you need some editing help, just ask! :)
Kitten_is_back
  • Kitten_is_back
okay thankyou :D

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anonymous
  • anonymous
No problem! :)
Kitten_is_back
  • Kitten_is_back
can you please help clearing it uip i'm not good at this :P
anonymous
  • anonymous
Sure, just shoot me a message with your paper (with added info on Trump) and I can edit grammar and word choice for you :)

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