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Help Me I don't know what to say for these MEDAL Eliminate the boring words and add as much detail as possible to the following sentences and do not use is were or was: 1.) Marry was afraid to receive the bad news. 2.) The lion was roaring.

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  1. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    Is there any words to pick from OR is it just by what you think?

  2. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    Just add an action verb and make it your own

  3. anonymous
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    2.) The lion began roaring ?

  4. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    would that work?

  5. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    Yes

  6. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    I am thinking about the first one.

  7. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    Okay, thank you!! :)

  8. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    Are you allowed to rearrange the sentence?

  9. anonymous
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    No

  10. anonymous
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    Mary was frightened to hear the horrible news.

  11. princess_sol
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    Marry, frightened to receive the horrible news, picked up the ringing phone with trembling hands hoping that her cousin had lived through the surgery. The lion roars at the humans with his face covered in blood after having escaped the imprisonment of the man who locked him away in his cage.

  12. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    @princess_sol she said you can't change the fundamental sentence

  13. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    You also can not use the words "is, were, or was"

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