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wow that's really good! ^u^
Did you check the original too?
Yeah, I did x3 and no problem :P
Do you really like it? It won't hurt my feelings, always room to improve.
I have another drawing, would you mind looking at it too? WARNING: It's VERY mediocre.
I do like it x3 and sure :P
I know that ones not really that great! xD
It's really good, x3 u definitely have talent keep goin, and maybe you should make speeddraws :D
Thank you so much!!
x3 no probz
I know first one has WAY better proportions than regular Shirou.
Really?? Am I actually good to you guys?
BRUH ARE YOU BLIND? YOU GOOD AF
ok gonna give honest feedback, since i'm an artist, you're learning and your drawing is good, but u need to practice on line quality and proportions a lot more and your shading is weak, work over it. :)
yeah he's right
Thank you for your critique, exactly what I was thinking. Going to invest in Copics and Prismacolors soon so I can color them and shade properly.
Actually, I basically sped-run the second one. That's why the face is so screwed up.
yeah white shading keep your hand light and don't force it, it should be neat that way and about the proportions, measure the drawing my keep ur hand and pencil straight, dont measure everything, but do measure the height and widht at least.
I don't actually measure, but I'll start.
but your drawing aint that bad, u can learn, yeah measurements improves 90% drawing as a kid i didn't measure as well since my observation was good but if u measure it improves where the eyes nose and ears and pellet comes.
Actually, those are my first drawings in about two years.
thats great then, idk how old and how new they are, just helping u out
Thanks all you guys!
dang your good at this you should keep going
That is really good man
@urbanmorgans @PinkSapphire @PizzaLover123 Could you check out my drawing please?
ur freeking amzing that pic is awesome
I don't like how the second one turned out, but I do think I did OK on the first one.
there both amazing
Since I am an artist kind of myself, I think that you should work on your shading more but I can see that you are going to improve and also, your drawings are pretty amazing. Practice on shading and the proportions/measurements ( I know that is really hard and that is one of the hardest parts for artists in my opinion at least). Anyways, as long as you keep practicing on those parts, your drawings will improve a lot.
Thank you for the critique!
Do you have any more drawings?
Yes, but they suck! xD
They aren't that bad. Just keep working on it and you will see so much improvement. :)
You're welcome :)
How long have you been drawing anime, is that what it's called?
Yes, and I started about 3 years ago, but stopped after one year, so my first drawings in two years.
Oh, okay. So you just started drawing.
I do more of the realistic drawing so I don't know a lot about anime and stuff like that.
It's OK. Yes I basically did just start. It's going great so far though, I love when I draw something that's OK it's so stisfying.
I know, right. I love it when my drawings turn out the way I want them to.
I know! It just makes you feel so good.
I'm probably going to draw something tonight. Would you be willing to give your thoughts?
Of course! But I might not see it until tomorrow.
I will. i sketch alot and have gotten to be a good artist.
That's fine! Could you post a drawing? @BishopPatton
yes... i will
What do ou draw? Realistic, anime, charcoal, what?
Can you post one tonight?
Could you post one Sapphire?
i like drawing pikachu, mickey mouse, and other cartoons
That's really good!
that is super good
It's not mine LOL just wanted to see what you thought cause I loved it! Did you check your message Sapphire?
The first two were mine, that one wasn't.
were you able to see mine
Yes! Did you draw that?
yea... i started sketching like 2 years ago
You drew that picture of Pikachu? @BishopPatton
You did a better job at shading! @ShirouxGhoul
I couldn't see your drawing @BishopPatton
That drawing wasn't mine. I just posted it.
oh... check my most recent question
i used to be into Pokemon
@BishopPatton @urbanmorgans @PinkSapphire @snoo @5BP @Nasa7 @misty_fox @PizzaLover123 @west_coast @Studyhelp_00002 @is5353 LOOK I THINK I DREW THIS GOOD!!!
Yes, this one is better.
it is really good
I am an artist, and I draw Manga/a lot of different characters. I am going to tell you the truth, your art is good. I agree with others on the fact that you really do have a talent! But, there are some downsides to your pictures. like working on proportions, shading, and hair etc. You can find TONS of tutorials on how to draw Manga on Youtube. Also, make sure you have the right tools. Ticonderoga pencils are perfect for shading. For coloring, I highly suggest Prismacolor pencils. Once I started using them, crayola and rose art etc. didn't compare. If you are not able to get Prismacolors, then regular crayola crayons are O.K. (Also, just reading Manga helped me draw a little bit better. Maybe reading more of it will help you). Good luck, and remember to keep practicing every day no matter what.
Wow that looks really good :D
I meant last one, I think that's like, my BEST drawing so far.
@Studyhelp_00002 Thanks! I'm going to get Prismacolors and Copics for my birthday! :D
Ooooh very nice! Also when is your birthday?
I have one more drawing, but don't want to post it, because I could have done WAY better on it.
i don't believe that
OK, so, my neck wasn't placed right, my facial proportions were ALL done terribly, and my eye's made it look like a chibi, even though it's a regular.
itsh otay :D
@Nasa7 It's all white for me.
Did it work?
YES! How?! That looks awesome!
credits to rational!! for that ^^
Can you do this?
Yep thanks @rational
then type this code into console ` $.getScript('http://assets.openstudy.com/updates/attachments/555abc50e4b0a00c802fe4dd-rational-1432123567213-draw.js')`
If you have google chrome follow the link I said :D
What does it do?
then you can post your pic inthe drawing like this |dw:1441493689872:dw|
Ohh, that one, I didn't like how that one turned out...
If you have chrome go here chrome://extensions/
you didn't like ?
Then click here http://assets.openstudy.com/updates/attachments/556e7c0ae4b02626b393b4ef-rational-1433951006795-draw_image_direct_public.crx
Then drag the download into the extensions
How? It doesn't work.
okay here press `Ctrl +shift+J`
and then open console
then enter this code $.getScript('http://assets.openstudy.com/updates/attachments/555abc50e4b0a00c802fe4dd-rational-1432123567213-draw.js') remove all spaces before u hit enter button
then open draw you will see black button
@PinkSapphire It's here! You can see the rip! LOL
Can you see it?
Yes, you are improving.
Is it good though? Did I miss anything major, or mess up big time?
Do you want to see the original?
It is better and you should finish the other parts of shading it though.
OK, want to see the original?
It IS weird compared to original, but I'm still learning. :)
It's not that weird but I can see that you've got potential in being a great artist. :)
Thanks! Do you think I've improved since, like, two days ago? That's when I started drawing again.
Like on a scale of 1-10, how much?
How much you've improved?
I don't know...
I rate 8 :D Good job :P
Thanks! Did you see the rip in the middle xD
Want me to upload when I'm done?
It never hurts to try.
Yea dat would be awesome
This is my FAVORITE opening for an anime. https://www.youtuberepeater.com/watch?v=cZ7zQbMxm28&name=Code+Geass+Opening+1+HD
@misty_fox Listen to it??
Yea i was just watching it, pretty cool ^u^ I have actually never seen anime before lolz but it seems interesting
The graphics aren't great, but this anime opening is a VERY close second. https://www.youtuberepeater.com/watch?v=X7g8z9YjqLQ&name=Katekyo+Hitman+Reborn+Opening+8
I gtg, bye!
Oh cool, I like it! And see ya :P
Ooooh nice! Dang i wish i could draw like that XD
Ok, not trying to be mean but you want an artistic opinion. I am no fan of anime in the art world, however I am not the emperor of art. I would say the less lines the better, and much more shading. You have a good start lets see how it evolves.