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DullJackel09

  • one year ago

Words on my mind freestyle 1

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  1. DullJackel09
    • one year ago
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    (introduction) This is just part one of freestyles I make they might even sound random and all over the place its just something I use to relieve stress posting this for fun don’t care for comments lol I also if its has any misspelling errors (Freestyle) This rap game it feels tedious im quite serious when it comes to picking up a mic my dad seems to think Im out of my mind for even thinking of pursuing a career like this I was never in it since the beginning the more mentally unstable I am I appears im better able to rap feel like iv lost my mind when im beginning to put a rhyme together in a different frame of mind when I put together a versed one train of thought one long sentence they tell me “you’ll never make anything on your raps” that’s cuz you douches haven’t bought it I try my hardest to keep the rage inside myself caged but when I spit on the mic I couldn’t restrain myself when I hurt you I couldn’t contain the fire burning inside so I f I left you in ashes I apologize but im not gonna apologize for putting my faith in rap better to put it in rap then the wrath I keep caged inside now I just sound like a mumbling idiot repeating what iv just been saying sorry one train of thought this rap I abuse sometimes to relieve my stress from reliving inside a certain moment sometimes I use the mic to elevate myself I apologize for sounding proud im just proud to be me and not a wanna be rapper because iv mastered my craft.

  2. leonardo0430
    • one year ago
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    10 out of 10 would sing again

  3. DullJackel09
    • one year ago
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    @animalfan1

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    @jabez177

  5. jabez177
    • one year ago
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    Nice! It's pretty cool! :) I'll read it later, I'm doing homework... :P Tag me again and i'll get back to it later... I'm pretty sure it's nice... :)

  6. Keigh2015
    • one year ago
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    Pretty good

  7. mdilley
    • one year ago
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    wow.....i like it

  8. mdilley
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    a lot

  9. Zyi6
    • one year ago
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    Denny... I think this was a great freestyle. However, I noticed a few lines that sounded REALLY familiar... I watch Dan Bull on Youtube, and I have heard his "Brit Raps Fast" video. Now, that being said, some lines in his video are as follows: Dan's Line: "My CD won't get me a mortgage, that's cause you wingspans haven't bought it..." YOUR line: "They tell me 'you won't get anywhere with your raps,' that's cause you douches haven't bought it." Dan's Line: "I tell myself that I'm proud to be me." YOUR Line: "I'm just proud to be me..." Other than that, it was great.

  10. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    dull this is AWESOME!!!!! i love it :3

  11. DullJackel09
    • one year ago
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    @Zyi6 lol thats actually odd my rap sounds similar i dont bite from other artist lol

  12. DullJackel09
    • one year ago
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    @Tazmaniadevil

  13. javalos01
    • one year ago
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    @DullJackel09 you were beast man

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