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  1. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    Proof read please? Mainly punctuation. By using diction and repetition, Cesar Chavez emphases the need to use nonviolence during moments of injustice. The rhetorical choices made in this argument draw forth feelings of understanding and cause the readers to think deeper into Chaves' point of view. The purpose is to carry a message that shows the power of nonviolence and what it brings to the world. People quickly follow the straight, bloody path of force and violence, rather than thinking deeper in search for the winding yet cleaner path. As human beings, we crave the freedom and power we believe was bestowed upon us by God. We will fight tooth and nail, even threw the deaths of many, in order to achieve these trivial things.

  2. anonymous
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    Looks good!

  3. nevermind_justschool
    • one year ago
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    Looks good, sounds good. It isn't choppy, it has a nice flow. Good job! On thing, though* instead of threw :) Awesome job otherwise!

  4. nevermind_justschool
    • one year ago
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    Through*** Whoops sorry!

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