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anonymous

  • one year ago

could someone help me revise my story i wrote

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  1. anonymous
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  2. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    Firstly, I'd like to ask what grade you are in so I can get an idea of what your teacher expects from you.

  3. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    There are quite a few grammatical errors here; Could you possibly try to revise it yourself in any way you can before you put it up here?

  4. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    10th

  5. anonymous
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    Alright. Do you have an idea of what you need to revise? If not I'll help with that.

  6. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    For starters you need to capitalize your I's. For example, "One day i was warming up" should be "One day I was warming up" (Left out the rest of the sentence for efficiency's sake)

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    You also need to work on when you're switching from scene to scene.

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    ya i did some work to it and it helped a lot thank you

  9. anonymous
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    Do you need some help revising the work you did to it?

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