anonymous
  • anonymous
could someone help me revise my story i wrote
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anonymous
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anonymous
  • anonymous
Firstly, I'd like to ask what grade you are in so I can get an idea of what your teacher expects from you.
anonymous
  • anonymous
There are quite a few grammatical errors here; Could you possibly try to revise it yourself in any way you can before you put it up here?

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anonymous
  • anonymous
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anonymous
  • anonymous
Alright. Do you have an idea of what you need to revise? If not I'll help with that.
anonymous
  • anonymous
For starters you need to capitalize your I's. For example, "One day i was warming up" should be "One day I was warming up" (Left out the rest of the sentence for efficiency's sake)
anonymous
  • anonymous
You also need to work on when you're switching from scene to scene.
anonymous
  • anonymous
ya i did some work to it and it helped a lot thank you
anonymous
  • anonymous
Do you need some help revising the work you did to it?

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