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babyx3boo

  • one year ago

I'm writing an essay about how progress is good. I want to start my attention grabber with a definition is this too simple.. "Progress is define as moving forward."

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  1. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    I'm going to be straight forward with you on this. I personally don't like that sentence, and I believe it could be put together a bit better. Maybe try something like "Progress is a step to success" or, "In order to be successful you need to make progress, in order to make progress you need to remove censorship." or something like that. Those aren't that good, but I'm trying to help :)

  2. babyx3boo
    • one year ago
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    Much often we find ourselves stuck in a situation and we overthink, which leads up to giving up or moving forward. Progress is known as moving forward, falling seven times and getting back up eight times. @Heyitsebony how's this? i still have other sentences to finish my intro and my thesis

  3. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    It's better, but the beginning part where it says "Which leads up to giving up or moving forward" I think the first word "up" should be changed into "us" and after that you're all good!

  4. babyx3boo
    • one year ago
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    Thank you again :) @Heyitsebony

  5. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    Anytime! :)

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