HelloKitty17
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Does anyone do English 2 through FLVS?
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@Loser66 I need your help!
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HelloKitty17
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•Include one paragraph in which you explain which techniques you have selected and how you put them to use in your re-write. This is what I have so far The two techniques I chose were flashback and dream sequence. I wrote the story starting from the moment the kings son asked Rapunzel to let down her hair to the moment she woke up. But through the whole story the reader doesn’t know it’s a flash back or a... @Ashleyisakitty
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this is the original story There were once a man and a woman who had long in vain wished for a child. At length the woman hoped that God was about to grant her desire. These people had a little window at the back of their house from which a splendid garden could be seen, which was full of the most beautiful flowers and herbs. It was, however, surrounded by a high wall, and no one dared to go into it because it belonged to an enchantress, who had great power and was dreaded by all the world. One day the woman was standing by this window and looking down into the garden, when she saw a bed which was planted with the most beautiful rampion (rapunzel), and it looked so fresh and green that she longed for it, she quite pined away, and began to look pale and miserable. Then her husband was alarmed, and asked: 'What ails you, dear wife?' 'Ah,' she replied, 'if I can't eat some of the rampion, which is in the garden behind our house, I shall die.' The man, who loved her, thought: 'Sooner than let your wife die, bring her some of the rampion yourself, let it cost what it will.' At twilight, he clambered down over the wall into the garden of the enchantress, hastily clutched a handful of rampion, and took it to his wife. She at once made herself a salad of it, and ate it greedily. It tasted so good to her—so very good, that the next day she longed for it three times as much as before. If he was to have any rest, her husband must once more descend into the garden. In the gloom of evening therefore, he let himself down again; but when he had clambered down the wall he was terribly afraid, for he saw the enchantress standing before him. 'How can you dare,' said she with angry look, 'descend into my garden and steal my rampion like a thief? You shall suffer for it!' 'Ah,' answered he, 'let mercy take the place of justice, I only made up my mind to do it out of necessity. My wife saw your rampion from the window, and felt such a longing for it that she would have died if she had not got some to eat.' Then the enchantress allowed her anger to be softened, and said to him: 'If the case be as you say, I will allow you to take away with you as much rampion as you will, only I make one condition, you must give me the child which your wife will bring into the world; it shall be well treated, and I will care for it like a mother.' The man in his terror consented to everything, and when the woman was brought to bed, the enchantress appeared at once, gave the child the name of Rapunzel, and took it away with her. Rapunzel grew into the most beautiful child under the sun. When she was twelve years old, the enchantress shut her into a tower, which lay in a forest, and had neither stairs nor door, but quite at the top was a little window. When the enchantress wanted to go in, she placed herself beneath it and cried: 'Rapunzel, Rapunzel, Let down your hair to me.' Rapunzel had magnificent long hair, fine as spun gold, and when she heard the voice of the enchantress she unfastened her braided tresses, wound them round one of the hooks of the window above, and then the hair fell twenty ells down, and the enchantress climbed up by it. After a year or two, it came to pass that the king's son rode through the forest and passed by the tower. Then he heard a song, which was so charming that he stood still and listened. This was Rapunzel, who in her solitude passed her time in letting her sweet voice resound. The king's son wanted to climb up to her, and looked for the door of the tower, but none was to be found. He rode home, but the singing had so deeply touched his heart, that every day he went out into the forest and listened to it. Once when he was thus standing behind a tree, he saw that an enchantress came there, and he heard how she cried: 'Rapunzel, Rapunzel, Let down your hair to me.' Then Rapunzel let down the braids of her hair, and the enchantress climbed up to her. 'If that is the ladder by which one mounts, I too will try my fortune,' said he, and the next day when it began to grow dark, he went to the tower and cried: 'Rapunzel, Rapunzel, Let down your hair to me.' Immediately the hair fell down and the king's son climbed up. At first Rapunzel was terribly frightened when a man, such as her eyes had never yet beheld, came to her; but the king's son began to talk to her quite like a friend, and told her that his heart had been so stirred that it had let him have no rest, and he had been forced to see her. Then Rapunzel lost her fear, and when he asked her if she would take him for her husband, and she saw that he was young and handsome, she thought: 'He will love me more than old Dame Gothel does'; and she said yes, and laid her hand in his. She said: 'I will willingly go away with you, but I do not know how to get down. Bring with you a skein of silk every time that you come, and I will weave a ladder with it, and when that is ready I will descend, and you will take me on your horse.' They agreed that until that time he should come to her every evening, for the old woman came by day. The enchantress remarked nothing of this, until once Rapunzel said to her: 'Tell me, Dame Gothel, how it happens that you are so much heavier for me to draw up than the young king's son—he is with me in a moment.' 'Ah! you wicked child,' cried the enchantress. 'What do I hear you say! I thought I had separated you from all the world, and yet you have deceived me!' In her anger she clutched Rapunzel's beautiful tresses, wrapped them twice round her left hand, seized a pair of scissors with the right, and snip, snap, they were cut off, and the lovely braids lay on the ground. And she was so pitiless that she took poor Rapunzel into a desert where she had to live in great grief and misery. On the same day that she cast out Rapunzel, however, the enchantress fastened the braids of hair, which she had cut off, to the hook of the window, and when the king's son came and cried: 'Rapunzel, Rapunzel, Let down your hair to me.' she let the hair down. The king's son ascended, but instead of finding his dearest Rapunzel, he found the enchantress, who gazed at him with wicked and venomous looks. 'Aha!' she cried mockingly, 'you would fetch your dearest, but the beautiful bird sits no longer singing in the nest; the cat has got it, and will scratch out your eyes as well. Rapunzel is lost to you; you will never see her again.' The king's son was beside himself with pain, and in his despair he leapt down from the tower. He escaped with his life, but the thorns into which he fell pierced his eyes. Then he wandered quite blind about the forest, ate nothing but roots and berries, and did naught but lament and weep over the loss of his dearest wife. Thus he roamed about in misery for some years, and at length came to the desert where Rapunzel, with the twins to which she had given birth, a boy and a girl, lived in wretchedness. He heard a voice, and it seemed so familiar to him that he went towards it, and when he approached, Rapunzel knew him and fell on his neck and wept. Two of her tears wetted his eyes and they grew clear again, and he could see with them as before. He led her to his kingdom where he was joyfully received, and they lived for a long time afterwards, happy and contented.
Ashleyisakitty
  • Ashleyisakitty
What do you feel you need assistance with?
HelloKitty17
  • HelloKitty17
i need to make a paragraph. i need help expanding it.
Ashleyisakitty
  • Ashleyisakitty
So you are summarizing it?
HelloKitty17
  • HelloKitty17
the assignment is For this assessment you must demonstrate your understanding of alternate plot structures by writing your own version of one of the fairy tales provided. •Select one of the following fairy tales. •Select two of the techniques from this lesson. •Rewrite part or all of the fairy tale using the two techniques you have selected. •Include one paragraph in which you explain which techniques you have selected and how you put them to use in your re-write. i need to finish up the last point
Ashleyisakitty
  • Ashleyisakitty
Oh, so you rewrote the store Rapunzel, and now you just need to explain your techniques? Post your rewrite and then your last paragraph and I will review them and help you make them better!
HelloKitty17
  • HelloKitty17
here is my rewrite. @Ashleyisakitty Rapunzel, Rapunzel, let down your hair!” The voice sounds different this time. It’s deeper than usual. Maybe the enchantress has a cold? But she doesn’t like waiting, so I toss my long, blonde, braided hair down to her and wait for her to climb up. But who comes through my window is not my enchantress! It is a man. He just stands and looks at me as I gasp in fright. “No!” he says to me as I step back in horror “its okay, I’m not here to hurt you. I just heard your beautiful voice and had to come and see what could make such a magnificent sound.” Okay so he doesn’t seem that bad. We start talking and he tells me he is the kings son. He tells me of his life and I tell him of mine. I soon fall in love with his intelligence and wit. We agreed that one day I would climb back down this tower with him and be his wife. But my enchantress caught us in our plans! She grabbed me by my hair as quick as a cat and in one swift motion cut it all off. It felt as if I were stabbed. I hit the floor in tears but I’m not sure what happened after that for everything went black. But when I awoke, I was not in my tower nor my bed. I was in what seemed to be a little cottage. I was there for many years alone except for when my enchantress would come to visit me in the mornings. Until one day while I was out picking berries for the enchantress in the woods I stumbled upon him. The kings son. I couldn’t stop the tears as I fell into his arms. But the enchantress ripped me from his grasp, tossed me to the ground, and pulled out a knife and set it to his throat. “Agh!” I yelped as I jolted awake. “Are you alright, love?” Asked the kings son, as he tucked my hair behind my ears. And so far for the paragraph i have this The two techniques I chose were flashback and dream sequence. I wrote the story starting from the moment the kings son asked Rapunzel to let down her hair to the moment she woke up. But through the whole story the reader doesn’t know it’s a flash back or a
HelloKitty17
  • HelloKitty17
Techniques that could be are •parallel plot •episodic plot •in medias res •flash forward •flashback •dream sequence
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Ashleyisakitty
  • Ashleyisakitty
"The techniques I chose to feature was the flashback technique as well as the dream sequence technique. I began the story starting from the moment the king's son asked Rapunzel to let down her hair, to the moment she woke up from her dream sequence. The reader is left in suspense when trying to figure out whether it was a dream or a flashback."
Ashleyisakitty
  • Ashleyisakitty
The rewrite is fine. There could be some revision however I dont think it will be necessary for this grade-level of work. I revised your last paragraph to sound more professional.
HelloKitty17
  • HelloKitty17
thanks! could you add a little more to it just so that it is a paragraph please?!
Ashleyisakitty
  • Ashleyisakitty
"The techniques I chose to feature was the flashback technique as well as the dream sequence technique. I began the story starting from the moment the king's son asked Rapunzel to let down her hair, to the moment she woke up from her dream sequence. I choose the contrasting techniques in my rewrite to show the the similarities between the two, and as such the reader is left in suspense when trying to figure out whether it was a dream or a flashback."
HelloKitty17
  • HelloKitty17
thank you so much! have a great rest of your day!
Ashleyisakitty
  • Ashleyisakitty
YW! Glad I could help.

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