Zyi6
  • Zyi6
Writing a new song with my band, and I need some feedback on the start of the song. It is not done yet, and this is only what I have so far.
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Zyi6
  • Zyi6
Nothing ever stops the talks, or the pain and the loss, trying to break the lock, regardless of the cost, but I've already lost, traded my heat for frost, to the bin I've been tossed, and left slow to react, now I know it's a fact, it's the skills I lacked.
anonymous
  • anonymous
sounds good
Zyi6
  • Zyi6
Updated Verse: Nothing ever stops the talks, or the pain and the loss, trying to break the lock, regardless of the cost, but I've already lost, traded my heat for frost, to the bin I've been tossed, and left slow to react, now I know it's a fact, it's the skills I lacked, my potential's been tapped, but I'm still getting lapped, uncharted land is mapped, my self-control has snapped, feeling like an outcast, it's like my time has past.

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Zyi6
  • Zyi6
Yes, it is a rap.
anonymous
  • anonymous
Sounds really good
anonymous
  • anonymous
sounds awesome!
javalos01
  • javalos01
@Zyi6
javalos01
  • javalos01
dude thats beast
javalos01
  • javalos01
ima rapper too and i think thats pretty good
javalos01
  • javalos01
its like suppa awsome
Zyi6
  • Zyi6
@javalos01 PM me for a collab bro.
anonymous
  • anonymous
Looks really good.
anonymous
  • anonymous
thats good and i would know im a song writer too that good keep it up
anonymous
  • anonymous
u have talent
Zyi6
  • Zyi6
Why thank you @kayli74 ...
anonymous
  • anonymous
your welcome

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