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Zyi6

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Writing a new song with my band, and I need some feedback on the start of the song. It is not done yet, and this is only what I have so far.

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  1. Zyi6
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    Nothing ever stops the talks, or the pain and the loss, trying to break the lock, regardless of the cost, but I've already lost, traded my heat for frost, to the bin I've been tossed, and left slow to react, now I know it's a fact, it's the skills I lacked.

  2. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    sounds good

  3. Zyi6
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    Updated Verse: Nothing ever stops the talks, or the pain and the loss, trying to break the lock, regardless of the cost, but I've already lost, traded my heat for frost, to the bin I've been tossed, and left slow to react, now I know it's a fact, it's the skills I lacked, my potential's been tapped, but I'm still getting lapped, uncharted land is mapped, my self-control has snapped, feeling like an outcast, it's like my time has past.

  4. Zyi6
    • one year ago
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    Yes, it is a rap.

  5. anonymous
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    Sounds really good

  6. anonymous
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    sounds awesome!

  7. javalos01
    • one year ago
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    @Zyi6

  8. javalos01
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    dude thats beast

  9. javalos01
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    ima rapper too and i think thats pretty good

  10. javalos01
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    its like suppa awsome

  11. Zyi6
    • one year ago
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    @javalos01 PM me for a collab bro.

  12. anonymous
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    Looks really good.

  13. anonymous
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    thats good and i would know im a song writer too that good keep it up

  14. anonymous
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    u have talent

  15. Zyi6
    • one year ago
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    Why thank you @kayli74 ...

  16. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    your welcome

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