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jagr2713

  • one year ago

Who wants to check my essay for grammar or any errors they see?

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  1. danysanchy97
    • one year ago
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    what essay? @jagr2713

  2. jagr2713
    • one year ago
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    do you guys want to see it?

  3. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    Yeah, I'll check. :D

  4. jagr2713
    • one year ago
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    ok give me a sec https://docs.google.com/document/d/1kHyim4eEFytUd3vMqD8vo8jdVk0zBnC80dSXmns4V3E/edit

  5. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    Sentence 4, no comma after "Well"

  6. jagr2713
    • one year ago
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    thanks what else

  7. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    i'm still reading. :D

  8. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    Do you have a title for your essay?

  9. jagr2713
    • one year ago
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    Yea its at the top

  10. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    I'm still checking over it, almost done.

  11. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    Tag me please, I have to switch computers and I wanna be able to find this.

  12. jagr2713
    • one year ago
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    @GrammaticalMistake

  13. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    its seems ok 2 me

  14. jagr2713
    • one year ago
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    Thanks

  15. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    Okay, I checked it. :D I printed a physical copy and marked it with pen, then scanned it and uploaded it here. Hope I helped! Good luck with your essay. :)

  16. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    @jagr2713

  17. jagr2713
    • one year ago
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    Sorry back

  18. jagr2713
    • one year ago
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    Ok thanks for the corrections "D

  19. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    Where it says "to a school that had no money", sorry, no mistake there.

  20. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    Oh no problem! It was fun. I'm glad I could help!

  21. jagr2713
    • one year ago
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    Ok thanks

  22. ShadowLegendX
    • one year ago
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    I see no indentation for your paragraphs. Also, never start your "Conclusion" paragraph with ," In conclusion." Not only do teachers and readers alike abhor it, it is without creativity and a poor way to start a paragraph. No matter what type of essay youʻre writing, you should want to constantly intrigue the reader, donʻt bore them. TLDR - Remove "In Conclusion" and find another way to start your final paragraph

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