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what essay? @jagr2713
do you guys want to see it?
Yeah, I'll check. :D
ok give me a sec https://docs.google.com/document/d/1kHyim4eEFytUd3vMqD8vo8jdVk0zBnC80dSXmns4V3E/edit
Sentence 4, no comma after "Well"
thanks what else
i'm still reading. :D
Do you have a title for your essay?
Yea its at the top
I'm still checking over it, almost done.
Tag me please, I have to switch computers and I wanna be able to find this.
its seems ok 2 me
Ok thanks for the corrections "D
Where it says "to a school that had no money", sorry, no mistake there.
Oh no problem! It was fun. I'm glad I could help!
I see no indentation for your paragraphs. Also, never start your "Conclusion" paragraph with ," In conclusion." Not only do teachers and readers alike abhor it, it is without creativity and a poor way to start a paragraph. No matter what type of essay youʻre writing, you should want to constantly intrigue the reader, donʻt bore them. TLDR - Remove "In Conclusion" and find another way to start your final paragraph