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jagr2713
 one year ago
Who wants to check my essay for grammar or any errors they see?
jagr2713
 one year ago
Who wants to check my essay for grammar or any errors they see?

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danysanchy97
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0what essay? @jagr2713

jagr2713
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1do you guys want to see it?

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Yeah, I'll check. :D

jagr2713
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1ok give me a sec https://docs.google.com/document/d/1kHyim4eEFytUd3vMqD8vo8jdVk0zBnC80dSXmns4V3E/edit

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Sentence 4, no comma after "Well"

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0i'm still reading. :D

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Do you have a title for your essay?

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0I'm still checking over it, almost done.

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Tag me please, I have to switch computers and I wanna be able to find this.

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Okay, I checked it. :D I printed a physical copy and marked it with pen, then scanned it and uploaded it here. Hope I helped! Good luck with your essay. :)

jagr2713
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1Ok thanks for the corrections "D

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Where it says "to a school that had no money", sorry, no mistake there.

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Oh no problem! It was fun. I'm glad I could help!

ShadowLegendX
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0I see no indentation for your paragraphs. Also, never start your "Conclusion" paragraph with ," In conclusion." Not only do teachers and readers alike abhor it, it is without creativity and a poor way to start a paragraph. No matter what type of essay youʻre writing, you should want to constantly intrigue the reader, donʻt bore them. TLDR  Remove "In Conclusion" and find another way to start your final paragraph
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