jagr2713
  • jagr2713
Who wants to check my essay for grammar or any errors they see?
English
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  • chestercat
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danysanchy97
  • danysanchy97
what essay? @jagr2713
jagr2713
  • jagr2713
do you guys want to see it?
anonymous
  • anonymous
Yeah, I'll check. :D

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jagr2713
  • jagr2713
ok give me a sec https://docs.google.com/document/d/1kHyim4eEFytUd3vMqD8vo8jdVk0zBnC80dSXmns4V3E/edit
anonymous
  • anonymous
Sentence 4, no comma after "Well"
jagr2713
  • jagr2713
thanks what else
anonymous
  • anonymous
i'm still reading. :D
anonymous
  • anonymous
Do you have a title for your essay?
jagr2713
  • jagr2713
Yea its at the top
anonymous
  • anonymous
I'm still checking over it, almost done.
anonymous
  • anonymous
Tag me please, I have to switch computers and I wanna be able to find this.
jagr2713
  • jagr2713
@GrammaticalMistake
anonymous
  • anonymous
its seems ok 2 me
jagr2713
  • jagr2713
Thanks
anonymous
  • anonymous
Okay, I checked it. :D I printed a physical copy and marked it with pen, then scanned it and uploaded it here. Hope I helped! Good luck with your essay. :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
@jagr2713
jagr2713
  • jagr2713
Sorry back
jagr2713
  • jagr2713
Ok thanks for the corrections "D
anonymous
  • anonymous
Where it says "to a school that had no money", sorry, no mistake there.
anonymous
  • anonymous
Oh no problem! It was fun. I'm glad I could help!
jagr2713
  • jagr2713
Ok thanks
ShadowLegendX
  • ShadowLegendX
I see no indentation for your paragraphs. Also, never start your "Conclusion" paragraph with ," In conclusion." Not only do teachers and readers alike abhor it, it is without creativity and a poor way to start a paragraph. No matter what type of essay youʻre writing, you should want to constantly intrigue the reader, donʻt bore them. TLDR - Remove "In Conclusion" and find another way to start your final paragraph

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