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Those woods are lovely dark and deep but i have promises to keep . In those woods dark and deep offer you eternal sleep. In those dark woods and deep you see the moon but hear no peep. Its misty and creepy , he told me I could not enter and he would not let me , for there was evil in store. I promised him that night that thy shall not enter the darkened woods. Then one night we started to fight,I did what i had promised not to do I went to the darken woods, only to find a illusion in time. Entering in I was swept away voices screaming in my brain, everything was misty and strange , now i lay

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  1. anonymous
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    here on the ground , where there is no sound , i should have listened and stayed away, now im in the ground where I ;ay , they never found me nor heard one cry, they never knew that I died.

  2. anonymous
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    lay****

  3. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    HELP ME MAKE IT SOUND BETTER AND ILL FAN AND MEDAL

  4. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    It's honestly pretty good. Maybe consider turning around some words so it blends together a little better. But all in all its pretty rocking.

  5. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    Try this: Those woods are lovely dark and deep but I have promises to keep. In those woods dark and deep offer you eternal sleep. In those dark, deep woods you see the moon but hear no peep. It’s misty and creepy, he told me I could not enter and he would not let me, for there was evil in store. I promised him that night that thy shall not enter the darkened woods. Then one night we started to fight, I did what I had promised not to do I went to the darken woods, only to find an illusion in time. Entering in I was swept away voices screaming in my brain, everything was misty and strange, now I lay here on the ground, where there is not any sound , I should have listened and stayed away, now I’m in the ground where I lay, they never found me nor heard one cry, they never knew that I died.

  6. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    basically the same thing. just a few things turned around.

  7. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    Thanks i really appreciate it!!! cx

  8. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    No problem. cx

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