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Which strategy would best improve the coherence of this​ paragraph? My​ grandfather, Joseph​ Pavlich, was a daring and adventurous man. At age​ eighteen, Joseph joined the Marines with a large group of​ Joseph's high school classmates. After weeks of challenging​ training, Joseph spent six months touring the Mediterranean Sea by boat. It was aboard this ship that Joseph earned​ Joseph's first medal of merit. A. using synonyms B. using transitions C. using pronouns D. using repeated words

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    C. Using Pronouns

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