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  • one year ago

My name is Maddox Smith. 2I am the Treasurer of the San Marcos High School Charity Club. 3We're having a canned food drive. 4This event is going to be off the hook and raise lots of dough for the homeless peeps. 5It's just two weeks away and I am writing to ask for your help. 6The Charity Club is planning to place collection boxes for canned food items at various local stores. 7We'd love it if you would allow us to place a bin at Shop Mart. 8All of the collections from the food drive will go to the local food bank to be sent out to local families who are really, super poor.

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  1. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    here is the question Choose the revision of sentence 8 that is most appropriate for a persuasive proposal here are the choices All of the collections from the food drive will go to the local food bank to be sent out to local families who are in need of the service. All of the collections from the food drive will go to the local food bank to be sent out to local families who are really needy. All of the collections from the food drive will go to the local food bank to be sent out to local families who do not have any money or food. All of the collections from the food drive will go to the local food bank to be sent out to local families who can't afford food because they spend their money unwisely. The sentence is appropriate as is.

  2. pinkcandyrosez882
    • one year ago
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    What do you think?

  3. pinkcandyrosez882
    • one year ago
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    That is, which one seems most professional?

  4. pinkcandyrosez882
    • one year ago
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    Or formal

  5. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    c @pinkcandyrosez882

  6. pinkcandyrosez882
    • one year ago
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    Okay. That one seems good but A also seems formal as well. What do you think of A also?

  7. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    yes

  8. pinkcandyrosez882
    • one year ago
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    Okay. I would say go with whichever of the two you think are correct. I was thinking A but it might be C, as well. So I would say go with your best guess :)

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