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HelloKitty17

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Can some help me add dialogue to this?! WILL MEDAL!

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  1. HelloKitty17
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    When he left Proserpina started to plot her way of escaping while she is completing King Pluto's tasks. For the falling action King Pluto is preparing lunch for Proserpina. As he insists that she eats he notices that his dog is barking. He tells the dog to quiet down until he started to notice Cerberus whine. That was when he saw Ceres enter through the front door. Ceres blasts at King Pluto yelling at the top of her lungs with full rage. King Pluto put up a guilty face and said that all he wanted was to feed her and that he found her wandering in the woods so he took her to his palace. Ceres then signaled Proserpina to come to her but before she can reach her King Pluto gets a hold of her. With a grin on his face he tried to manage some kind of negotiation to make a deal with Ceres for them to live with him and be his maids, but before he can finish his sentence Ceres casts a spell on him and placed King Pluto in a death hold of vines. After the spell King Pluto then started to worry more about his life than the maid negotiation. He then reconsidered his negotiation. He gave Proserpina to Ceres and then promised never to mess with either of them again. After that Ceres let him go. Ceres is on her way out with tears of joy and relief with Proserpina.

  2. HelloKitty17
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    @KAKES1967 @ganeshie8 @TorilovesVampires

  3. HelloKitty17
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    @Anaise

  4. HelloKitty17
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    it just needs dialogue for a final draft.

  5. Anaise
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    Do you understand anything about making the dialogue? We can work from there!

  6. HelloKitty17
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    @Anaise a little bit yes

  7. HelloKitty17
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    @DALLINATOR720 @Elsa213

  8. Anaise
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    Ok , tell me what you have so far.

  9. HelloKitty17
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    @Anaise I have this and I need to add dialogue for the final draft The beginning of this story will start off with King Pluto settling Proserpina into his palace and preparing her for the job of being his maid. With no warning whatsoever Proserpina ignores King Pluto. The reason why she ignores King Pluto is because of a flashback of her mom (Ceres) telling her not to go near seaside. King Pluto reacted to this by snapping her back into reality, telling her not to worry about her past life and anybody worrying about her because he is not a bad man and he will give her a better life than the one she once had before. After this Pluto began to think that Proserpina may try to escape and never return. For the climax of this story King Pluto goes and lives on his daily routine. When he left Proserpina started to plot her way of escaping while she is completing King Pluto's tasks. For the falling action King Pluto is preparing lunch for Proserpina. As he insists that she eats he notices that his dog is barking. He tells the dog to quiet down until he started to notice Cerberus whine. That was when he saw Ceres enter through the front door. Ceres blasts at King Pluto yelling at the top of her lungs with full rage. King Pluto put up a guilty face and said that all he wanted was to feed her and that he found her wandering in the woods so he took her to his palace. Ceres then signaled Proserpina to come to her but before she can reach her King Pluto gets a hold of her. With a grin on his face he tried to manage some kind of negotiation to make a deal with Ceres for them to live with him and be his maids, but before he can finish his sentence Ceres casts a spell on him and placed King Pluto in a death hold of vines. After the spell King Pluto then started to worry more about his life than the maid negotiation. He then reconsidered his negotiation. He gave Proserpina to Ceres and then promised never to mess with either of them again. After that Ceres let him go. Ceres is on her way out with tears of joy and relief with Proserpina. When the two finally leave his palace, King Pluto fixes himself up, goes into his master bedroom and starts thinking of other ways to get new maids.

  10. HelloKitty17
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    @ganeshie8 please help

  11. HelloKitty17
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    @kevin_bridges @Falling_In_Katt @Anaise @james1769 @KJSaif @Shalante

  12. james1769
    • one year ago
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    wow thats alot

  13. HelloKitty17
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    that is what I have so far and it can have internal dialogue.

  14. HelloKitty17
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    @pooja195 @lakota1999

  15. lakota1999
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    um

  16. HelloKitty17
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    @ArcticReeses @Falling_In_Katt

  17. HelloKitty17
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    @Sam_and_Deans_doll @SamsungFanBoy @Kate_J2002

  18. HelloKitty17
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    Someone help me out!

  19. HelloKitty17
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    @YoungStudier @DALLINATOR720 @Shadowknight6263 @Anaise

  20. HelloKitty17
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    I need internal dialogue please

  21. HelloKitty17
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    @Loser66 @AlexandervonHumboldt2 @batman19991 @CloverRacer @the_ocean_girl @erica0000000 @haleyelizabeth2017 @KendrickLamar2014 @Anaise @ShirouxGhoul @fryfry2003 @JOHN__22 @pandaluvs @binkeyboy03 @MikeyMaximum @Nnesha @NotTim @YoungStudier

  22. YoungStudier
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    @HelloKitty17 , I would try posting this in the writing section as well, maybe people could help you over there. :)

  23. lakota1999
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    im trying to help

  24. YoungStudier
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    I don't doubt you are @lakota1999 , I'm just makin a suggestion...... I'm trying not to sound like a jerk......I don't think it's working.....

  25. lakota1999
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    ?????

  26. YoungStudier
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    I was suggesting that if she wanted another opinion, she could post it in writing and that maybe someone could help her over there....

  27. lakota1999
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    oh

  28. YoungStudier
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    Yup...

  29. batman19991
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    littel late but yea

  30. HelloKitty17
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    help please

  31. HelloKitty17
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    @OregonDuck

  32. OregonDuck
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  33. OregonDuck
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    The reason why she ignores King Pluto is because of a flashback of her mom (Ceres) telling her ( Proserpina ) "Now Proserpina don't to go near seaside." replace it with this

  34. HelloKitty17
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    Alright put the dialogue should be in the middle like where you lighted

  35. OregonDuck
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    it is fine it fits in right there

  36. HelloKitty17
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    can you add more dialogue to other parts?

  37. OregonDuck
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    only 1 more ok?

  38. HelloKitty17
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    alright but is needs to make almost like a conversation between the mom and daughter

  39. OregonDuck
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    it can;t it is interal duh

  40. HelloKitty17
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    well there can be more than type of dialogue

  41. HelloKitty17
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    @YoungStudier need help

  42. HelloKitty17
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    can you go on the math section can try to get people to help me?!

  43. OregonDuck
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    just leave it is good story

  44. OregonDuck
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    @VampirePrincess159

  45. HelloKitty17
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    @KAKES1967

  46. OregonDuck
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    @LovinD_123

  47. HelloKitty17
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    can you get a mini conversation please. that is it.

  48. anonymous
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    With stem-changing verbs, the stem often does not change for ____. a. first and second person singular b. first and second person plural c second and third person singular d second and third person plural

  49. OregonDuck
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    why are you asking your question UNDER OUR QUESTION?!?!?

  50. anonymous
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    No one is in my question lol

  51. HelloKitty17
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    do don't do that.

  52. anonymous
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    |dw:1443810866971:dw|

  53. OregonDuck
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    |dw:1443810902216:dw|

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    |dw:1443810954886:dw|

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