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HelloKitty17
 one year ago
Can some help me add dialogue to this?! WILL MEDAL!
HelloKitty17
 one year ago
Can some help me add dialogue to this?! WILL MEDAL!

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HelloKitty17
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.2When he left Proserpina started to plot her way of escaping while she is completing King Pluto's tasks. For the falling action King Pluto is preparing lunch for Proserpina. As he insists that she eats he notices that his dog is barking. He tells the dog to quiet down until he started to notice Cerberus whine. That was when he saw Ceres enter through the front door. Ceres blasts at King Pluto yelling at the top of her lungs with full rage. King Pluto put up a guilty face and said that all he wanted was to feed her and that he found her wandering in the woods so he took her to his palace. Ceres then signaled Proserpina to come to her but before she can reach her King Pluto gets a hold of her. With a grin on his face he tried to manage some kind of negotiation to make a deal with Ceres for them to live with him and be his maids, but before he can finish his sentence Ceres casts a spell on him and placed King Pluto in a death hold of vines. After the spell King Pluto then started to worry more about his life than the maid negotiation. He then reconsidered his negotiation. He gave Proserpina to Ceres and then promised never to mess with either of them again. After that Ceres let him go. Ceres is on her way out with tears of joy and relief with Proserpina.

HelloKitty17
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.2@KAKES1967 @ganeshie8 @TorilovesVampires

HelloKitty17
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.2it just needs dialogue for a final draft.

Anaise
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Do you understand anything about making the dialogue? We can work from there!

HelloKitty17
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.2@Anaise a little bit yes

HelloKitty17
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.2@DALLINATOR720 @Elsa213

Anaise
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Ok , tell me what you have so far.

HelloKitty17
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.2@Anaise I have this and I need to add dialogue for the final draft The beginning of this story will start off with King Pluto settling Proserpina into his palace and preparing her for the job of being his maid. With no warning whatsoever Proserpina ignores King Pluto. The reason why she ignores King Pluto is because of a flashback of her mom (Ceres) telling her not to go near seaside. King Pluto reacted to this by snapping her back into reality, telling her not to worry about her past life and anybody worrying about her because he is not a bad man and he will give her a better life than the one she once had before. After this Pluto began to think that Proserpina may try to escape and never return. For the climax of this story King Pluto goes and lives on his daily routine. When he left Proserpina started to plot her way of escaping while she is completing King Pluto's tasks. For the falling action King Pluto is preparing lunch for Proserpina. As he insists that she eats he notices that his dog is barking. He tells the dog to quiet down until he started to notice Cerberus whine. That was when he saw Ceres enter through the front door. Ceres blasts at King Pluto yelling at the top of her lungs with full rage. King Pluto put up a guilty face and said that all he wanted was to feed her and that he found her wandering in the woods so he took her to his palace. Ceres then signaled Proserpina to come to her but before she can reach her King Pluto gets a hold of her. With a grin on his face he tried to manage some kind of negotiation to make a deal with Ceres for them to live with him and be his maids, but before he can finish his sentence Ceres casts a spell on him and placed King Pluto in a death hold of vines. After the spell King Pluto then started to worry more about his life than the maid negotiation. He then reconsidered his negotiation. He gave Proserpina to Ceres and then promised never to mess with either of them again. After that Ceres let him go. Ceres is on her way out with tears of joy and relief with Proserpina. When the two finally leave his palace, King Pluto fixes himself up, goes into his master bedroom and starts thinking of other ways to get new maids.

HelloKitty17
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.2@ganeshie8 please help

HelloKitty17
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.2@kevin_bridges @Falling_In_Katt @Anaise @james1769 @KJSaif @Shalante

HelloKitty17
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.2that is what I have so far and it can have internal dialogue.

HelloKitty17
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.2@pooja195 @lakota1999

HelloKitty17
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.2@ArcticReeses @Falling_In_Katt

HelloKitty17
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.2@Sam_and_Deans_doll @SamsungFanBoy @Kate_J2002

HelloKitty17
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.2Someone help me out!

HelloKitty17
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.2@YoungStudier @DALLINATOR720 @Shadowknight6263 @Anaise

HelloKitty17
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.2I need internal dialogue please

HelloKitty17
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.2@Loser66 @AlexandervonHumboldt2 @batman19991 @CloverRacer @the_ocean_girl @erica0000000 @haleyelizabeth2017 @KendrickLamar2014 @Anaise @ShirouxGhoul @fryfry2003 @JOHN__22 @pandaluvs @binkeyboy03 @MikeyMaximum @Nnesha @NotTim @YoungStudier

YoungStudier
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0@HelloKitty17 , I would try posting this in the writing section as well, maybe people could help you over there. :)

YoungStudier
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0I don't doubt you are @lakota1999 , I'm just makin a suggestion...... I'm trying not to sound like a jerk......I don't think it's working.....

YoungStudier
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0I was suggesting that if she wanted another opinion, she could post it in writing and that maybe someone could help her over there....

batman19991
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0littel late but yea

OregonDuck
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1The reason why she ignores King Pluto is because of a flashback of her mom (Ceres) telling her ( Proserpina ) "Now Proserpina don't to go near seaside." replace it with this

HelloKitty17
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.2Alright put the dialogue should be in the middle like where you lighted

OregonDuck
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1it is fine it fits in right there

HelloKitty17
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.2can you add more dialogue to other parts?

HelloKitty17
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.2alright but is needs to make almost like a conversation between the mom and daughter

OregonDuck
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1it can;t it is interal duh

HelloKitty17
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.2well there can be more than type of dialogue

HelloKitty17
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.2@YoungStudier need help

HelloKitty17
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.2can you go on the math section can try to get people to help me?!

OregonDuck
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1just leave it is good story

OregonDuck
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1@VampirePrincess159

HelloKitty17
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.2can you get a mini conversation please. that is it.

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0With stemchanging verbs, the stem often does not change for ____. a. first and second person singular b. first and second person plural c second and third person singular d second and third person plural

OregonDuck
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1why are you asking your question UNDER OUR QUESTION?!?!?

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0No one is in my question lol

HelloKitty17
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.2do don't do that.

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0dw:1443810866971:dw

OregonDuck
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1dw:1443810902216:dw

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0dw:1443810954886:dw
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