anonymous
  • anonymous
Could someone give me some advice on a thesis?
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anonymous
  • anonymous
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anonymous
  • anonymous
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ShadowLegendX
  • ShadowLegendX
Post the infos

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anonymous
  • anonymous
"Is decision making a crucial part of children’s/teens development?"
anonymous
  • anonymous
Thats all I got Lol
ShadowLegendX
  • ShadowLegendX
Is that the prompt?
ShadowLegendX
  • ShadowLegendX
or your attempt at a thesis
anonymous
  • anonymous
And "Are parents restrictions enabling child development?"
anonymous
  • anonymous
Thats my attempt at a thesis..
ShadowLegendX
  • ShadowLegendX
What is the prompt
anonymous
  • anonymous
Parents restrictions over there child. kind of thing
ShadowLegendX
  • ShadowLegendX
I need the prompt if I am to help you
anonymous
  • anonymous
Explain what the prompt would be?
ShadowLegendX
  • ShadowLegendX
Prompt: In Canada, the weather is cold this time of year Thesis: Canada is cold this time of year because of itʻs location, the season time and the winds
ShadowLegendX
  • ShadowLegendX
I gave my take on the prompt, supporting my choice with three reasons
ShadowLegendX
  • ShadowLegendX
The following three body paragraphs, each supporting one reason
anonymous
  • anonymous
Decision making is a crucial part of a child's development
anonymous
  • anonymous
Thats my prompt I guess
ShadowLegendX
  • ShadowLegendX
I need to know what the prompt is, so we can properly form a thesis
ShadowLegendX
  • ShadowLegendX
ok, thatʻs it
ShadowLegendX
  • ShadowLegendX
Ok, now you need to know, how or why is decision making a crucial part of a childʻs development
ShadowLegendX
  • ShadowLegendX
From there, you get your three reasons
ShadowLegendX
  • ShadowLegendX
and BAM, u got a thesis, easy
anonymous
  • anonymous
Decision making is one of the most important skills your children need to develop to become healthy and mature adults. Decision making is crucial because the decisions your children make dictate the path that their lives take. Teaching your children to make their own decisions has several benefits. When they make a good decision, they can gain the greatest amount of satisfaction and fulfillment because they chose it. When your children make bad decisions, they may suffer for it, but they can learn from the experience and make better decisions in the future.
ShadowLegendX
  • ShadowLegendX
State the three reasons, all in one paragraph
ShadowLegendX
  • ShadowLegendX
I mean sentence
ShadowLegendX
  • ShadowLegendX
Right after because, you need to have your three reasons, that support your claim
anonymous
  • anonymous
Decision making is a crucial part of a child's development because it is pathing there way to adulthood, to indicate the path there lives will follow, and make bad decisions, they may suffer for it, but they can learn from the experience and make better decisions in the future.
anonymous
  • anonymous
Need's correct. but is that better?
ShadowLegendX
  • ShadowLegendX
Decision making is a crucial part of a child's development because it is pathing(paving is a better word, pathing is actually incorrect) there(their is the correct word) way to(too is a better word for this) adulthood, to indicate the path there(their is the correct word, again) lives will follow, and make bad decisions, they may suffer for it, but they can learn from the experience and make better decisions in the future.
ShadowLegendX
  • ShadowLegendX
Thesis seems good, you just had spelling errors
anonymous
  • anonymous
Is it too long? or does it go off topic?
ShadowLegendX
  • ShadowLegendX
Well, I think you can shorten it. Remember, thesis goes in your introductory paragraph. There, you have a hook, first, then thesis + some information about what youʻre going to talk about. But you want to save all the good stuff for the three following paragraphs
anonymous
  • anonymous
How would I shorten it?
anonymous
  • anonymous
Decision making is a crucial part of a child's development because it is paving their way too adulthood, and helps to indicate the path their lives with follow.
ShadowLegendX
  • ShadowLegendX
I mean, itʻs kinda fine actually, just try to add more to your introductory paragraph with a nice hook, and a couple more sentences to make it qualify as an actual paragraph
ShadowLegendX
  • ShadowLegendX
*will follow
ShadowLegendX
  • ShadowLegendX
and you need your third reason
anonymous
  • anonymous
Decision making is a crucial part of a child's development because it is paving their way too adulthood, builds effective life skills, and helps to indicate the path their lives with follow.
anonymous
  • anonymous
will*
ShadowLegendX
  • ShadowLegendX
There we go!
ShadowLegendX
  • ShadowLegendX
I like it
anonymous
  • anonymous
Thank you!:)
ShadowLegendX
  • ShadowLegendX
1st and 3rd reason sounds a bit similar tho, try to make the 3rd reason have a bit different meaning, and I think you will be fine
ShadowLegendX
  • ShadowLegendX
You donʻt want to have two paragraphs talking about the same thing (indicating paths...paving ways, similar...)
anonymous
  • anonymous
choosing between possible solutions to a problem?

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