anonymous
  • anonymous
Medal, 10 Owlbucks, Fan and Testimonial..... Please help
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anonymous
  • anonymous
I did a essay and i want some to retype it with the correct grammar
anonymous
  • anonymous
I was a high school student when I became friend with Matt Donald. It was an unexpected friendship. His way of living was totally different from mine. We were in the same class, I used to remain silent most of the time and remain in my own shell never tried to gain any social interaction. Once we were playing football, I was standing in the defense and suddenly the opponent player hit me a kick I couldn’t withstand that and fall down. I remained in that stat for about 10 to 15 minutes, all the members of my team were surrounding me and providing me first aid. At that time Matt came, while looking at my condition, he just took me to a private clinic. I was faint and didn’t know what happened to me. He remained there until I came back to my senses. He asked me about how I was feeling? I was just stunned that someone unknown to me is caring me like we know each other’s for a long time. That was his kindness to help others, whether you know him or not. The doctors advised to take rest for a few days. During that period Matt used to come daily to ask about my health. I was really pleased by his good deeds. He was truly a man of virtue. Matt’s habits made me his biggest fan and after some time we became good friends. I told him about my inner desire to help others and the resistance I face to do this. He helped me a lot gaining the confidence in myself and to help others just for the sake of others well-being. He taught me how to live a balanced life by maintaining social life and personal issue in a balance. It was he who helped me to go through all my stress levels and become more socialized person. Whenever we get time, we sit together and discuss about all the issue, he listened to me carefully and supports me in every aspect. I learned a lot from Matt he is my best friend. He pointed out the negatives in me and helped me tackle those negative points and become a better person. Although he was totally different from me, but he inspired me, it was that inspiration that we became friends. Now this friendship is 3 years old, but still the spark of it is right there. His good deeds showed me the right path and I followed his footsteps and became a more respectable man in the society. I think this is the beauty of this wonderful relation of friendship it teach us a lot of lessons and help us to lead a better life. You can find good friends anywhere, it’s just a matter of right time and right place. Sometimes you became friend with an unexpected person and he changes your whole life. This shows the purity of relation, so we must look for good deeds and be ready for any unexpected friend to give us a lesson of life.
tacotime
  • tacotime
I got this (hold on)

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anonymous
  • anonymous
Im taking English Honers 4 and it has to sound Brilliant so please add whatever you think will bring my grade to a A.
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anonymous
  • anonymous
I fainted*
anonymous
  • anonymous
Lol Why? And I wish English had qualified helpers
tacotime
  • tacotime
I was a high school student when I became friends with Matt Donald. It was an unexpected friendship. His way of living was totally different from mine. We were in the same class. I used to remain silent most of the time and remain in my own shell; never trying to talk to anyone. Once we were playing football, I was standing in the defense and suddenly the opponent player kicked me and I fell down. I remained in that state for about 10 to 15 minutes, all the members of my team were surrounding me and providing me first aid. At that time Matt came and seeing my condition, he just took me to a private clinic. I was faint and didn’t know what happened to me. He remained there until I came back to my senses. He asked me how I was feeling. I was just stunned that someone I didn’t know was caring for me like we’ve know each other for a long time. He was kind enough to help others, whether he knew them or not. The doctors advised me to take rest for a few days. During that period Matt used to come daily to ask about my health. I was really pleased by his good deeds. He was truly a man of virtue. Matt’s habits made me his biggest fan and after some time we became good friends. I told him about my inner desire to help others and the resistance I face to do this. He helped me a lot in gaining the confidence in myself and to help others just for the sake of others well-being. He taught me how to live by maintaining a social life and personal issue balance. It was he who helped me to go through all my stress levels and become a more socialized person. Whenever we have time, we sit together and discuss all the issues. He listens to me carefully and supports me in every aspect. I learned a lot from Matt; he is my best friend. He pointed out the negatives in me and helped me tackle those negative points and become a better person. Although he was totally different from me, but he inspired me, it was that inspiration that we became friends. Now this friendship is 3 years old, but still the spark of it is right there. His good deeds showed me the right path and I followed his footsteps and became a more respectable man in the society. I think the beauty of this wonderful friendship teach us a lot of lessons and helps us to lead a better life. You can find good friends anywhere, it’s just a matter of right time and right place. Sometimes you became friend with an unexpected person and he changes your whole life. This shows the purity of relationships, so we must look for good deeds and be ready for any unexpected friend to give us a lesson of life.
tacotime
  • tacotime
If you want a better grade I would suggest making the end not to corny and not repeating yourself so much (in the last two paragraphs)
anonymous
  • anonymous
You still have some Grammar errors and can you change it to your suggestion to get that A.
anonymous
  • anonymous
@hhelpplzzzz can you give it a try pleeeaaase
anonymous
  • anonymous
I was a high school student when I became friends with Matt Donald. It was an unexpected friendship. His way of living was totally different from mine. We were in the same class. I used to remain silent most of the time and remained in my own shell; never trying to talk to anyone. Once we were playing football, I was standing in the defense and suddenly the opponent player kicked me and I fell down. I remained in that state for about 10 to 15 minutes, all the members of my team were surrounding me and providing me first aid. At that time Matt came and seeing my condition, he just took me to a private clinic. I fainted and didn’t know what happened to me. He remained there until I came back to my senses. He asked me how I was feeling. I was just stunned that someone I didn’t know was caring for me like we’ve know each other for a long time. He was kind enough to help others, whether he knew them or not. The doctors advised me to take rest for a few days. During that period Matt used to come daily to ask about my health. I was really pleased by his good deeds. He was truly a man of virtue. Matt’s habits made me his biggest fan and after some time we became good friends. I told him about my inner desire to help others and the resistance I face to do this. He helped me a lot in gaining the confidence in myself and to help others just for the sake of others well-being. He taught me how to live by maintaining a social life and personal issue balance. It was Matt who helped me to go through all my stress levels and become a more socialized person. Whenever we have time, we sit together and discuss all the issues. He listens to me carefully and supports me in every aspect. I learned a lot from Matt; he is my best friend. He pointed out the negatives in me and helped me tackle those negative points and become a better person. Even though he was totally different from me, he inspired me. His inspiration was why we became friends. Now this friendship is 3 years old, but the spark of it is still right there. His good deeds showed me the right path and I followed his footsteps and became a more respectable man in the society. I think the beauty of this wonderful friendship teaches us a lot of lessons and helps us lead a better life. You can find good friends anywhere, it’s just a matter of right time and right place. Sometimes you became friend with an unexpected person and that person changes your whole life. This shows the purity of relationships, so we must look for good deeds and be ready for any unexpected friend to give us a lesson of life.
anonymous
  • anonymous
im not exactly a pro at english s I changed eveything I know isn't correct
anonymous
  • anonymous
everything*
anonymous
  • anonymous
but i would still want someone else to look at it
anonymous
  • anonymous
Thanks alot guys.. @tacotime can you just give it a double check. And would you guys be okay if i split it and give each of you 5 owlbucks?
anonymous
  • anonymous
you could give them all to tacotime:)
tacotime
  • tacotime
@hhelpplzzzz edit is good but: all the members of my team were surrounding me and providing me first aid providing me first aid - get rid of this second me because it is redundant.
anonymous
  • anonymous
Could you do me a favor and give her a medel when she replies
tacotime
  • tacotime
thank you ^_^

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