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MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
can someone plz look at my essay
MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
can someone plz look at my essay

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jackfrost33
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0what do you want to know about it cause its really good

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0plz look at my grammar and spelling mistake

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0and look at my sentence structure is it making scence or not

jackfrost33
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0it has good structure and a helpful hint for secondguessing yourself w/ spelling simple just look it up

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Im correcting sentence structure now. What is 'maladies'?

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0oh yeah it be the malaria disease

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0So is it supposed to be there?

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Maybe use abnormalities instead.

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0yeah it was has to be there because smoke also effects the malaria disease

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0@Whitelynx ok but what about the whole essay is it look good or

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Overall, the essay is pretty dang good. You have good, structured paragraphs, and pretty sound arguments. Occasionally your sentences are confusing though. For instance: "such as people smoking last for five years will damage their respiratory system" is bad grammar. what should we replace it with?

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Your essay structure as a whole is pretty clean too.

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0@Whitelynx do you want me to delete that sentence

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0No. I think we should change it.

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Ill put corrections in red. Ill send it to you soon. I barely changed the sentence.

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0"cigar smokers who inhale" I think we should get rid of "who inhale" but I'm not actually going to take anything like that out incase you want to leave it. Im just going to strikethrough it.

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Actually, I'll underline stuff I'm not sure about. Anything that you should get rid of will be strikethroughed

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0wait are you goona send me the document or what

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Yeah. Sorry its taking so long. Im being careful with my check.

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0no worry its fine and by the way thnx for helping and giving ur time

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0No problem bro. You ended one of your paragraphs with "Compared to nonsmokers, cigar smokers who inhale deeply." which is an incomplete sentence.

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Dued wanna know a good site ??

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0good site for what

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0http://www.reverso.net/spellchecker/englishspellinggrammar/ take chunks and paste it in and check it works!!

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0to check grammar and punctuation

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0yes :) fan and medal for help in future to I'm good at science

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0o and math but more science guy :)

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0@Whitelynx are you still here

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0o need help or naw from me??

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0You should indent the first line of each new paragraph

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0what you mean by indent

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0dued let me see the paper?

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0wen i click it nothing pops up for me but on the top is says "Untitled"

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0" In some caught smoke also help the elders because" what do you mean?

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0is one is better

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0yes and indent 1st line

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Example of indentation: (click tab here)Smoking cigarettes should be made illegal in Canada. According to the Health Canada, Cigarette smoke kills over 37,000 people in Canada each year. That's more than the amount of all murders, alcoholrelated deaths, car accidents and suicides. The inquiry has also shown that, in 2002, about 17% of deaths were due to smoking (20% in males and 12% in females).

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0what you mean click tab here

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0on your key board thats how you indent

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0do you have a google dox account

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0I can correct it on that easy

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0ok paste it on a google dox and then make it by sharing it and make the link public,everyone can view then paste like in the box

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Aye. Finished corrections. here.

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ODP9AT8P3PKCWzmFxJqW8A0mbUHpvzQew1Flv5zNmU/edit

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0i don't think u got all of them_

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Does your teacher require mla format? If so, you need to redo your bibliography portion so that it includes all the necessary information

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0MTALH got to this link >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1W7MXNXQgARadFdWoz9nJc40KmvIrG5kD3M22B4A8UVc/edit?usp=sharing

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0I have to sleep now. I got almost all of your mistakes. Red is my corrections red with a line is stuff you should delete, and red with underlined is stuff I'm not sure of. The others can help with the rest. Night!

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0White r u sure you got everything

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0@Whitelynx i can't open ur document thou

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Almost positive. Go over it again though. his last paragraphs were choppy, so I did a lot there.

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Read second sentence_

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Meh. Go over it. Night.

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0MTH r u on this link ?

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0ok just look how i correct it ok?

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0hey can u chat so i can ask you some questions

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0kills? or killed Ps when I ask u a question go back to the doc to see what I'm asking you ok?

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0idk i will say killed

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0bruh i need to hurry ok it almost midnight need to sleep

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0ok i know i also have to go

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0what is yello fever

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0nvm do u know what tar is

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0the black thing in the ciagrees

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0its be tar not ta

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0i mean in the document you put ta

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0does this have to have a certain amount of paragraphs and is this due tommaro?

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0lol its due tonight

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0ok and is there a paragraph climate?

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0is has to be 750 to 100 words i guess so

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0stupid auto correct limate

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0wait 75 to 100 word!

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Potential Essay Topics: Essay Length: 750100 Words

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0ps this might take a while so hold on tight for me ok your ideas are all over the place

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0ok no worry i am here

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0wait so what solution are u talking about?

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0and it wouldn't save money but would help with keeping your body fit

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0ok so they only ban the smoking ciagrees in the family place which is good to be safe from smoking but i am saying its not a properly way to safe from the smoking we have to do something else for being safe

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0no I know what your talking about I'm past that

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Tip Don't use first,second,third,etc

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0ok find better transition words

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0why not but these are the transition words thou

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0know where are we

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0ok done with first two paragraphs

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0I don't think cigarets are waste of money to the government

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0dued I really need to leave in like 10 min hopefully I finish we wills ok

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0i know its waste of our own money thou

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0o thats what u meant to say ok

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0we have to pay for medication etc

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0acually there is no medication for tar in the lungs

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0wait do you use that grammar website

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0I am now I'm freaking tired AF

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0just for the last 2 paragraphs of so

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0lol its almost done man

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0I know i got you ill finish it

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0why the way are you muslim

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0I mean some of you thesis statements are off but there workable

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0just delete that line

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Dude your so lucky that whitlynx never checked it or you would be screwed

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0wait how is it the waste of the consumers money

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0if people smoke alot then the consumers get more money

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0inshallah you will get a reward from allah for helping

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0thnx a lot man and may god bless you

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0hey dude how many words does it have to be?

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0750 to 100 i guess so

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0ok 687 or something like that and I'm Done :)

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0so copy and paste that into a word document

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0np wat grade r u in?:)

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0actually english is not my first language so

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0O kool hey dude fan me for future help I don't really care if you want to give me a medal you can but it don't matter to me

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Mine either Hindi is mine

MTALHAHASSAN2
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0so are you from India

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0no i was born in the Us,Illinois

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0ok ima go to sleep but fan me so I can help u in the future

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0because i could play with u i got a mic

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Find the verb in the sentence (GAVE) Ask "What was given?" (The blue ribbon) Ask " Who was given the blue ribbon?" (Rosa) I used this and it helped A LOT! I got 100s on a bunch of tests. :)
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