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anonymous

  • one year ago

I need some back-up please! I will fan! :) (first verse) I shouldn't be upset, I shouldn't let it get to me, I shouldn't feel this regret, Burning in my soul------------> (chorus) Oh! I shouldn't want to be with you, Cuz then none of my dreams would come true, I would be in a place of hell, sitting there crying in my shell, wishing there was a way out, a way out.... I'm still working on verse two, but let me know what you think! And be honest!! :)

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  1. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    You need to show why you cant be with whom and what makes you want to... other than that the emotion seems to be doing fine .

  2. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    thanks

  3. anonymous
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    I think that what you have so far is good but like @Kreayhea_ said give us some more details. Also put as much emotion as possible into it. Is it a slower song or a faster song?

  4. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    the begining is slow and the chorus is faster

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