I need some back-up please! I will fan! :) (first verse) I shouldn't be upset, I shouldn't let it get to me, I shouldn't feel this regret, Burning in my soul------------> (chorus) Oh! I shouldn't want to be with you, Cuz then none of my dreams would come true, I would be in a place of hell, sitting there crying in my shell, wishing there was a way out, a way out.... I'm still working on verse two, but let me know what you think! And be honest!! :)

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I need some back-up please! I will fan! :) (first verse) I shouldn't be upset, I shouldn't let it get to me, I shouldn't feel this regret, Burning in my soul------------> (chorus) Oh! I shouldn't want to be with you, Cuz then none of my dreams would come true, I would be in a place of hell, sitting there crying in my shell, wishing there was a way out, a way out.... I'm still working on verse two, but let me know what you think! And be honest!! :)

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You need to show why you cant be with whom and what makes you want to... other than that the emotion seems to be doing fine .
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I think that what you have so far is good but like @Kreayhea_ said give us some more details. Also put as much emotion as possible into it. Is it a slower song or a faster song?

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the begining is slow and the chorus is faster

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