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Destinyyyy

  • one year ago

I have too many words in my second body paragraph.. Can someone help me remove a few sentences? My essay is on Hills Like White Elephants. Theme- choices

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  1. Destinyyyy
    • one year ago
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    Word count 397... I can only have 200-250 words

  2. Destinyyyy
    • one year ago
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    @Directrix

  3. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    The way you wrote it makes me confused I can try to shorten it but I would need to know who your audience is,children or parents?

  4. Destinyyyy
    • one year ago
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    Its a rough draft so Im still working on it.. I don't have an audience.

  5. Destinyyyy
    • one year ago
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    Any ideas on what I can remove? @jaeuni

  6. Destinyyyy
    • one year ago
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    Its perfect thank you. I will award you best response. Can you remove both of your responses so that I am not accused of plagiarism.

  7. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    lol np

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