please review this first paragraph of my essay and give me advice on how you would improve it
High school is sometimes reguarded as the gateway to everyones profession. Whether they go to college to further their education or start their career early and skip college. Either way many people during this time are faced with decisions. I have decided for my career that I want to be a lawyer. The struggles and rewards of being a lawyer are shown by: their education, the various career paths, and their work.
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it is allowed to be in first person
and anything else is probably not allowed
what kind of decisions? why you want to be a lawyer? then you are good.