SkriLL3xMast3r
  • SkriLL3xMast3r
what do you think of my song?
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SkriLL3xMast3r
  • SkriLL3xMast3r
The way you are You're like a star In the sky flying so high my life will never be the same without your love in my heart i thought that we were perfect You are my all and if you leave you will make me fall down into a pit that is so deep I will never escape it You are my all and you won't believe how far I will fall I am not mad, and I am not sad I give you my all and I will not fall As long as we're together I will never fall
SkriLL3xMast3r
  • SkriLL3xMast3r
We will never fall
SkriLL3xMast3r
  • SkriLL3xMast3r
What do you think, @Shadrac

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anonymous
  • anonymous
its really good so far... Any time i write a song to any one, I always use simile & metaphors... like i would say maybe you are a star instead of like, a star... and the pit i would call it a never ending downward trend or a bottomless pit
anonymous
  • anonymous
also i would say more about whoever it is your speaking of and how they make you feel
SkriLL3xMast3r
  • SkriLL3xMast3r
thank yu
SkriLL3xMast3r
  • SkriLL3xMast3r
it is just the beginning
shishi990
  • shishi990
sounds good so far!!!
SkriLL3xMast3r
  • SkriLL3xMast3r
thank you @shishi990 @Seantheskater helped me a lot
shishi990
  • shishi990
thats good!!!
SkriLL3xMast3r
  • SkriLL3xMast3r
i have a lot to learn from him.
SkriLL3xMast3r
  • SkriLL3xMast3r
anyone can give suggestions as well
dmcdowell
  • dmcdowell
thats perfect man. keep it up
SkriLL3xMast3r
  • SkriLL3xMast3r
thank you
Vickyisthesmartone123
  • Vickyisthesmartone123
Well it doesn't quite make sense but the lyrics are awesome!
Vickyisthesmartone123
  • Vickyisthesmartone123
Because first you say you will fall then you won't. Like..?
SkriLL3xMast3r
  • SkriLL3xMast3r
well, my relationship with my gf is really complicated. one week, we are as close as can be, and the next, we barely speak to each other. @Vickyisthesmartone123
Vickyisthesmartone123
  • Vickyisthesmartone123
Oh ok I see now...mmhhh:) Interesting
SkriLL3xMast3r
  • SkriLL3xMast3r
yeah, so I wanted my song to reflect both sides of our relationship. This is only the beginning anyway.
Vickyisthesmartone123
  • Vickyisthesmartone123
Well good job!
SkriLL3xMast3r
  • SkriLL3xMast3r
thank you. i fanned and medaled u. thanks for the feedback!
Vickyisthesmartone123
  • Vickyisthesmartone123
Welcome
Vickyisthesmartone123
  • Vickyisthesmartone123
I did too
jakyfraze
  • jakyfraze
@SkriLL3xMast3r what's up man I'm here :)
SkriLL3xMast3r
  • SkriLL3xMast3r
i got suspended. want to create a song by replying with verses?
SkriLL3xMast3r
  • SkriLL3xMast3r
suspended from openstudy for spamming
SkriLL3xMast3r
  • SkriLL3xMast3r
@jakyfraze
SkriLL3xMast3r
  • SkriLL3xMast3r
@souleaterz
jakyfraze
  • jakyfraze
@SkriLL3xMast3r yeah I'm here
SkriLL3xMast3r
  • SkriLL3xMast3r
k.
SkriLL3xMast3r
  • SkriLL3xMast3r
what u want to do?
jakyfraze
  • jakyfraze
@SkriLL3xMast3r what do you mean?
SkriLL3xMast3r
  • SkriLL3xMast3r
we can create a song by replying to eachothers verses.
jakyfraze
  • jakyfraze
I'm really bad at those kind of things :(
SkriLL3xMast3r
  • SkriLL3xMast3r
@souleaterz
SkriLL3xMast3r
  • SkriLL3xMast3r
@shishi990 u still there?
shishi990
  • shishi990
yeah im here
SkriLL3xMast3r
  • SkriLL3xMast3r
@jakyfraze if i can get @souleaterz to reply, we can help you, k?
SkriLL3xMast3r
  • SkriLL3xMast3r
@foolofatook
shishi990
  • shishi990
am i needed in here?
SkriLL3xMast3r
  • SkriLL3xMast3r
What do u know about the moderators?
shishi990
  • shishi990
alot y
SkriLL3xMast3r
  • SkriLL3xMast3r
Whelp, they suspended me from openstudy for an hour, because @souleaterz and @foolofatook and i were making a song. I don't know why they would do that. do you?
shishi990
  • shishi990
yes they can do that
jakyfraze
  • jakyfraze
i have no clue
SkriLL3xMast3r
  • SkriLL3xMast3r
right, but why?
shishi990
  • shishi990
was it inappropriate?
SkriLL3xMast3r
  • SkriLL3xMast3r
yeah, it was bs. im gonna go find @souleaterz be back in a sec.
shishi990
  • shishi990
ight
SkriLL3xMast3r
  • SkriLL3xMast3r
no it wasn't inappropriate. it was a song about insanity
SkriLL3xMast3r
  • SkriLL3xMast3r
ill post it: Im losing my head! In fatal darkness..... Lies the dead! Im seein' all red! Its ALL IN MY HEAD! But the stars aline in a very daring way! My mind is breaking away from all reality... I dont know if ill ever see the blue light sky again! But the end is so near i know it will result in...(music drops in) INSANITY!!! I can feel it rushing through my bones!!!! don't know just where to GO! Im fallin on my knees! i dont know what to believe! (whispery)Im fallin to my death.... dont know what to do. im fallin all alone! (Heavy metal music) I NEED TO FIND A HOME!! Just where i belong!!! Where i wont be unknown..... T HEN I WONT HAVE TO BE ALONE!! (solo guitar riff!) Im going all alone, to my funeral... there is no goin' back........ im never going back! TO THE PLACE CALLED INSANITY!!!
shishi990
  • shishi990
ohh wow...
SkriLL3xMast3r
  • SkriLL3xMast3r
what do u think? it is a song about human infirmity
shishi990
  • shishi990
sounds weird but good at the same time
SkriLL3xMast3r
  • SkriLL3xMast3r
yeah, it was a collaboration of me, @gokuporter, and @souleaterz
SkriLL3xMast3r
  • SkriLL3xMast3r
i did every other verse, starting with the first.
shishi990
  • shishi990
cool
SkriLL3xMast3r
  • SkriLL3xMast3r
i forgot @foolofatook
SkriLL3xMast3r
  • SkriLL3xMast3r
they are all really cool people.
SkriLL3xMast3r
  • SkriLL3xMast3r
hello?
jakyfraze
  • jakyfraze
@SkriLL3xMast3r yeah?
shishi990
  • shishi990
im still here
SkriLL3xMast3r
  • SkriLL3xMast3r
do u have any songs that u have written?
SkriLL3xMast3r
  • SkriLL3xMast3r
hey @jakyfraze see if u can get ahold of @souleaterz and @foolofatook
jakyfraze
  • jakyfraze
foolofatook is offline
SkriLL3xMast3r
  • SkriLL3xMast3r
it shows him as online for me...
SkriLL3xMast3r
  • SkriLL3xMast3r
he is right at the top of the list of people I have fanned.
SkriLL3xMast3r
  • SkriLL3xMast3r
@jakyfraze?
jakyfraze
  • jakyfraze
@SkriLL3xMast3r oh :/ but on my side it says he is offline. weird lol
SkriLL3xMast3r
  • SkriLL3xMast3r
huh. Can u get hold of @souleaterz
SkriLL3xMast3r
  • SkriLL3xMast3r
@souleaterz
Vickyisthesmartone123
  • Vickyisthesmartone123
still want a song?
SkriLL3xMast3r
  • SkriLL3xMast3r
sure, why? got some more lyrics in a new question, but in a different genre...
SkriLL3xMast3r
  • SkriLL3xMast3r
@Vickyisthesmartone123?
SkriLL3xMast3r
  • SkriLL3xMast3r
@shishi990 I have someone to mix the song i showed you... Just need someone to sing it... Know anybody?
SkriLL3xMast3r
  • SkriLL3xMast3r
Hello?
shishi990
  • shishi990
um no i dont tbh
SkriLL3xMast3r
  • SkriLL3xMast3r
ok... Ill keep looking... :p i tried XD
shishi990
  • shishi990
do u want a guy or girl to sing it??
Vickyisthesmartone123
  • Vickyisthesmartone123
i can but i am singing a duet with @micahm tho this week
Vickyisthesmartone123
  • Vickyisthesmartone123
But we can still do it
SkriLL3xMast3r
  • SkriLL3xMast3r
@shishi990 it doesn't matter to me...
SkriLL3xMast3r
  • SkriLL3xMast3r
alright... @Vickyisthesmartone123 what were you thinking?
Vickyisthesmartone123
  • Vickyisthesmartone123
HOLD ON IM DOING SCIENCE I CANT THINK RIGHT NOW I HAVE A MILLION THINGS IN MY HEAD SHESH
SkriLL3xMast3r
  • SkriLL3xMast3r
ok. msg me later....
shishi990
  • shishi990
ohh ok
jakyfraze
  • jakyfraze
@Vickyisthesmartone123 i know me to :( Spanish is hard lol
Vickyisthesmartone123
  • Vickyisthesmartone123
No it's easy!
Vickyisthesmartone123
  • Vickyisthesmartone123
I said science not spanish
jakyfraze
  • jakyfraze
@Vickyisthesmartone123 i know lol. I'm doing Spanish
Vickyisthesmartone123
  • Vickyisthesmartone123
IT'S EASY THO
Vickyisthesmartone123
  • Vickyisthesmartone123
:)
jakyfraze
  • jakyfraze
@Vickyisthesmartone123 ITS EASY!!! :o please help me, i will give you a medal for each one
Vickyisthesmartone123
  • Vickyisthesmartone123
K
Vickyisthesmartone123
  • Vickyisthesmartone123
TAG ME
jakyfraze
  • jakyfraze
@Vickyisthesmartone123 i will when your ready i don't want to stop you from what your doing :)
jakyfraze
  • jakyfraze
@Vickyisthesmartone123 Thank you :)
Vickyisthesmartone123
  • Vickyisthesmartone123
IT'S OK ill tell you when im done like 2 more min ok?
Vickyisthesmartone123
  • Vickyisthesmartone123
stay here!
jakyfraze
  • jakyfraze
@Vickyisthesmartone123 okay awesome :)
jakyfraze
  • jakyfraze
@Vickyisthesmartone123 thank you so much
Vickyisthesmartone123
  • Vickyisthesmartone123
hehe
Vickyisthesmartone123
  • Vickyisthesmartone123
welcome
Vickyisthesmartone123
  • Vickyisthesmartone123
Ok done go
jakyfraze
  • jakyfraze
@Vickyisthesmartone123 yes!! okay hold on let me tag you
Vickyisthesmartone123
  • Vickyisthesmartone123
k

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