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The way you are You're like a star In the sky flying so high my life will never be the same without your love in my heart i thought that we were perfect You are my all and if you leave you will make me fall down into a pit that is so deep I will never escape it You are my all and you won't believe how far I will fall I am not mad, and I am not sad I give you my all and I will not fall As long as we're together I will never fall
We will never fall
What do you think, @Shadrac
its really good so far... Any time i write a song to any one, I always use simile & metaphors... like i would say maybe you are a star instead of like, a star... and the pit i would call it a never ending downward trend or a bottomless pit
also i would say more about whoever it is your speaking of and how they make you feel
it is just the beginning
sounds good so far!!!
thank you @shishi990 @Seantheskater helped me a lot
i have a lot to learn from him.
anyone can give suggestions as well
thats perfect man. keep it up
Well it doesn't quite make sense but the lyrics are awesome!
Because first you say you will fall then you won't. Like..?
well, my relationship with my gf is really complicated. one week, we are as close as can be, and the next, we barely speak to each other. @Vickyisthesmartone123
Oh ok I see now...mmhhh:) Interesting
yeah, so I wanted my song to reflect both sides of our relationship. This is only the beginning anyway.
Well good job!
thank you. i fanned and medaled u. thanks for the feedback!
I did too
@SkriLL3xMast3r what's up man I'm here :)
i got suspended. want to create a song by replying with verses?
suspended from openstudy for spamming
@SkriLL3xMast3r yeah I'm here
what u want to do?
@SkriLL3xMast3r what do you mean?
we can create a song by replying to eachothers verses.
I'm really bad at those kind of things :(
@shishi990 u still there?
yeah im here
@jakyfraze if i can get @souleaterz to reply, we can help you, k?
am i needed in here?
What do u know about the moderators?
Whelp, they suspended me from openstudy for an hour, because @souleaterz and @foolofatook and i were making a song. I don't know why they would do that. do you?
yes they can do that
i have no clue
right, but why?
was it inappropriate?
yeah, it was bs. im gonna go find @souleaterz be back in a sec.
no it wasn't inappropriate. it was a song about insanity
ill post it: Im losing my head! In fatal darkness..... Lies the dead! Im seein' all red! Its ALL IN MY HEAD! But the stars aline in a very daring way! My mind is breaking away from all reality... I dont know if ill ever see the blue light sky again! But the end is so near i know it will result in...(music drops in) INSANITY!!! I can feel it rushing through my bones!!!! don't know just where to GO! Im fallin on my knees! i dont know what to believe! (whispery)Im fallin to my death.... dont know what to do. im fallin all alone! (Heavy metal music) I NEED TO FIND A HOME!! Just where i belong!!! Where i wont be unknown..... T HEN I WONT HAVE TO BE ALONE!! (solo guitar riff!) Im going all alone, to my funeral... there is no goin' back........ im never going back! TO THE PLACE CALLED INSANITY!!!
what do u think? it is a song about human infirmity
sounds weird but good at the same time
yeah, it was a collaboration of me, @gokuporter, and @souleaterz
i did every other verse, starting with the first.
i forgot @foolofatook
they are all really cool people.
im still here
do u have any songs that u have written?
hey @jakyfraze see if u can get ahold of @souleaterz and @foolofatook
foolofatook is offline
it shows him as online for me...
he is right at the top of the list of people I have fanned.
@SkriLL3xMast3r oh :/ but on my side it says he is offline. weird lol
huh. Can u get hold of @souleaterz
still want a song?
sure, why? got some more lyrics in a new question, but in a different genre...
@shishi990 I have someone to mix the song i showed you... Just need someone to sing it... Know anybody?
um no i dont tbh
ok... Ill keep looking... :p i tried XD
do u want a guy or girl to sing it??
i can but i am singing a duet with @micahm tho this week
But we can still do it
@shishi990 it doesn't matter to me...
alright... @Vickyisthesmartone123 what were you thinking?
HOLD ON IM DOING SCIENCE I CANT THINK RIGHT NOW I HAVE A MILLION THINGS IN MY HEAD SHESH
ok. msg me later....
@Vickyisthesmartone123 i know me to :( Spanish is hard lol
No it's easy!
I said science not spanish
@Vickyisthesmartone123 i know lol. I'm doing Spanish
IT'S EASY THO
@Vickyisthesmartone123 ITS EASY!!! :o please help me, i will give you a medal for each one
@Vickyisthesmartone123 i will when your ready i don't want to stop you from what your doing :)
@Vickyisthesmartone123 Thank you :)
IT'S OK ill tell you when im done like 2 more min ok?
@Vickyisthesmartone123 okay awesome :)
@Vickyisthesmartone123 thank you so much
Ok done go
@Vickyisthesmartone123 yes!! okay hold on let me tag you